Not bad, but some comments. First of all, the texts you used are too small to read. I cant read them in small version, while the canvas of the magazine is quite big. So the proportions are not ok, imo. If you'd be in a bookshop and see this magazine, no way that you'd be able to read the cover. Other thing is that the texts seem to get off from the cover. Put them a bit more inside the image, will read better. "In the spotlight" is nice, but why you aligned it with the X? I can imagine it would fit well above PXLE or next to that, aligned with to top (so above "xpose" ). Free cd is also always welcome, but you wrote it 2 times, not sure if that's necessary. Your use of colors is ok, it has some computer/ICT- look and feel. And you're consequent with the use of black and white for your texts (which is also good, imo).
Ow, and you have permission to use my image .
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I agree with wazowski, the print is too small, but i do like the image and I think it's a nice looking cover! Reply »

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Where's my free CD? You really should invest in some better sticky tape! Lovely entry! Reply »

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Wow! nice Reply »

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wow, great improvement!!! Looks really great!!! good luck author! Reply »

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what ladybug said..HUGE IMPROVEMENT and a very fun read Reply »

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not 100% sure, but i think barcodes must be black on white Reply »

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Yep, looks better already . Good luck! Reply »

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wooohoo another person that did no actual photoshop work!!! just texting lol Reply »

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