This is SUPER~!!!!!! Great work author.. the fox's shadow needs some tweaking (he's a little floaty.. but not bad) just a wonderful idea and image.. (Maybe blur his edges a little.. not sure because I can't really see the detail.. but the story is WON DER FUL!!!!!

EDIT: Had to come back and take another peek!!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.. it really sticks in my mind.. and author... that is an incredible thing to do to me..nothing EVER sticks in my mind LOL Reply »

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hhhhuhuhuh awwww Reply »

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Nice one. I find that the fox seems a little more saturated than the dogs. And his bum looks like it's beginning to blend into the ground. Other than those few things, I think you're good. Reply »

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yes, desaturate the fox a bit. you might also want to play with the contrast and/or curves Reply »

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good work Reply »

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Toned down the fox and improved the area of his hind quarters --thanks to all for the comments Reply »

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Very nice! Reply »

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Nice one! Maybe the shadow where the fox touches the ground should be a bit darker (compared with the lying dog's shadow) Otherwise Reply »

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nice idea, but fox's shadow could use some work. see how the shadows are under the dog that is laying down? mimic those! Good luck! Reply »

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and naturally enemies are in right side - man and horse. Reply »

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