good work. You added the reflection on people, but if you give more highlighted edges will be better, and reduce the reddish tone of people

but I see you spent nothing on the hair cut LOLOLOLOL.. get some style... LOL. looks like Adam Sandler after a rough week end LOL.. good luck author.. very cute concept

I may be wrong but I believe men are, on average, a bit taller than women. So I think the perspective is off a bit with all three of them being the same height. Plus with the women behind "Mr. Sunglasses Indoors" either he has little man complex or they are from Amazonia (is that a place?). Also, if you'll soften the edges of his arms he won't look so cut out.

The man seems very small compared to the women, even the width of the man seems small, work on perspective and color correcting the red out of the photo to a more cool color and you should have a pretty good piece. Good luck!

the girls don't exactly look as though they are in the same picture:l

The flesh tones would appear more cool than red if actually in this room. Try toning the red down a bit.