The front edge of the mattresses would be in shadow, otherwise nice job...

Thanks I have shadow on top on wall and sadow on floor plus leg post and bottom of bars hope I got right

You still need to add shadow to the front plane of the mattresses...the tops would be lighter, the fronts darker...

thanks CMYK46 I hope this is what you ment

This was a good idea. I laughed. Maybe a little more shadowing or burning on the lock though.

Thanks I changed it a little hope it works

The lock and beds still look 2-dimentional

cool idea!

It seems like something is missing. Great idea but, ya just seems like there could be something else added to make it more interesting.

neat image.

I'd blur the edges & make the faces less opaque, but not bad...

I agree with CMYK46 but nice originality and imagination.

happy halloween to you author

interesting idea.gl

that's pretty neat!

Thanks Sean - I try! One day I will be a master!

The actual light is a wee bit blurry but the colors and shadows were placed very well. Good luck to you.

Thanks - the light was supposed to look a little blurry, but I think I overdid it (perhaps I shouldn't have blurred it at all). Unfortunately, I didn't use a smart filter otherwise I would undo it and resubmit.

might want to bring out the IN THEATERS text.. it blends to well and is hard to read.. but the overall effect is very well done (the names are pretty inventive as well

you spelled writer wrong in screen writer. You spelled it "writter". Cool idea, GL!

the problems fixed, and thank you for the comments

cool idea ... wonderful use of source.