The Time Of My Life - created by tatianemaria


The Time Of My Life
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avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

The left hand side, with the "ladder" that looks to be coming from the one woman's shoulders is distracting from your focal point, the dancing couple, and adds nothing to the image. You should consider cropping it to remove the distraction and redirect the focus to the subject.

The same can be said of the white object on the right. It doesn't need to be in the picture.

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

This photo is somewhat worse than the other. Now the woman with the "light ladder" from her shoulders is even MORE prominent in the photo, and the couple are almost dead centered, with the ladder lady as an accent...You would have done better cropping the other photo...

author says:

The number of reviews that I had to make you go to your photography portfolio to meet the master's work in photography I wanted to teach, so insistently, to do this or that. I honestly would rather not say everything I think ... I respect you, from what I saw, it is equally or more apprentice and I limit myself to just say that your photos and your practice with the picture is not consistent with his words and his lessons on how to make a nice photo . I think you are harder to master than for apprentice, judging by what I saw from your pictures here on the site. [...]

author says:

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But mean to imply that it is photography guru ... this is really unfortunate.

Introduce me to practice what you say about photos that you may win some respect and some of my attention to his words. Otherwise I'll keep trying to learn from those who know and show in practice that knows more than me.

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