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Beautifully done, but I think it would ahve more impact if you cropped it a lot closer.
Thank you Friiskiwi, I cropped a bit in the bottom, do you think I've to crop more?
Personally I would crop out most of the writing and a little of the right. Really cutting out 50% of the image. This is just my opinion, but it's about writing instruments, not about writing.
Good luck, and do what you feel happy with.
I would follow your suggestions, thanks again friiskiwi
amazing...! the objects in the photograph giving me 3D appearance ! Particularly the stamp (i think its stamp) and the paper-weight/ink-pot on the side...
I don't know vaiibhavjain, I took this shot from the top, with the camera built-in flash on
In the hi-res you can see a thin shadow under the stamp and the pen.
I love the old tools but they seem unconnected. Nice idea and the handwriting is outstanding
There's no ink in the inkwell, and it seems too disconnected from the rest of the image, which is compounded by the positioning. If it had been angled about 45 degrees, the visual movement would have echoed the pen and stamp, making it more a part of the overall composition.
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