Old writing tools - created by patty


Old writing tools
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avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

Beautifully done, but I think it would ahve more impact if you cropped it a lot closer.

author says:

Thank you Friiskiwi, I cropped a bit in the bottom, do you think I've to crop more?

avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

Personally I would crop out most of the writing and a little of the right. Really cutting out 50% of the image. This is just my opinion, but it's about writing instruments, not about writing.
Good luck, and do what you feel happy with.

author says:

I would follow your suggestions, thanks again friiskiwi

avatar drskn08
drskn08 says:

amazing...! the objects in the photograph giving me 3D appearance ! Particularly the stamp (i think its stamp) and the paper-weight/ink-pot on the side...

author says:

I don't know vaiibhavjain, I took this shot from the top, with the camera built-in flash on
In the hi-res you can see a thin shadow under the stamp and the pen.

avatar Remsphoto
Remsphoto says:

I love the old tools but they seem unconnected. Nice idea and the handwriting is outstanding

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

There's no ink in the inkwell, and it seems too disconnected from the rest of the image, which is compounded by the positioning. If it had been angled about 45 degrees, the visual movement would have echoed the pen and stamp, making it more a part of the overall composition.

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