I Coming - created by smokebigbird


I Coming
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(5 years and 3323 days ago)

avatar FallingHorse

You have a few dust bunnies - dust spots on your sesnsor

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dem90 says:

I love what you have captured here, but I'm not liking the composition too much. The reflection is amazing, but it throws the picture off. All that space above the bird is empty for the most part, while below the bird has a small shape. That throws the composition off balance. Also, the black strip at the top is kinda ugly because it looks like a retarded vignetting. This has real potential, the soft calm neutral colors just bring out how peacefully the bird is flying. It's a quite gorgeous scene you have captured here, you just need a few minor tough ups to really make it special.

author says:

I to wondered about the reflection, i have cropped it a little closer, hope u like it better now

avatar rbsgrl
rbsgrl says:

@ dem90: Constructive feedback is always nice to have but using wording such as "like a retarded vignetting" is unnecessary.
Nice shot author!

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