Great lighting and the angle is very nice. Only problem I see is the reflection of your studio in the bear's glasses. In the future to avoid this you can either adjust your light or, if you're lazy like me, simply take the lenses out of the frames. I learned that trick from the photographer who took my senior photos many, many years ago.
Still, your scene is awesome and it really paints a nice story. Kind of reminds me of a Hallmark card. :P Hope that helps! All the best!

Thanks magicsteve for the great tips! I shot it next to a window and it definately caused a glare. I will try and reshoot tomorrow and hopefully get a better effect with the glasses!

While taking school pictures, I learned that if you bring your light up about a foot or so, it helps with glare. Sometimes if you tilt the subjects head slightly down or to the side (only a touch) that helps too. But since you are using natural light, you may have to adjust the scene a bunch to get it right. Either way, I love this photo and the setup!

Thankyou Kellie

cool shot...the old one look so wise...GL author

nice light