I am all alone - created by jawshoewhah


I am all alone
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I have made some edits since uploading this. The first time I did I was out and I have an Acer one and for all of you out there who have one, you know that you can't use photo shop without an external monitor. (5 years and 1920 days ago)

avatar karaflazz
karaflazz says:

Personally i would set this up differently.
A landscape frame with the warehouse filling it all (the car leaves the impression that she is not totally alone) & the couch with the model far away from the camera (not very far...just as far as it needs to show that she is kinda small/alone/helpless in all this emptiness).
All ways following the rule of thirds (placing the couch & the model in proper position).
I don't know if you have the equipment to take this shot on an other time of the day (external flash f e ),but it would add a lot to the feeling you want to impress.

author [banned] says:

Thank you for your critique, karaflazz. I value your opinion. I could go out and re-shoot but the model is not always available. Plus I uploaded this from a bar last night and couldn't make any edits. I hope this has improved the image.

avatar karaflazz
karaflazz says:

Aw...
You crop it too much my friend.
At least the car is gone!
GL.

author [banned] says:

Guess better luck next time

author [banned] says:

Wow, didn't expect to make it to the top 10. hmmmm

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