Your sketch is very good and I like the colors, except the skin color, it's too yellow and looks like clothes. I will vote higher if this part is better. GL

really nice, I love it

I agree with langstrum...that's only suggestion for this work...good luck author

Maybe make the skin the color of her gloves would be more suitable, very nice manga cartoon though.

EDIT; this looks MUCH BETTER

gud sketching man

awwwsome....

This oozes awesomness, excellent artwork.

This looks MUCH better now, way better w/ the more subtle coloring. I saw it before and thought it was a great drawing, but the colors were too harsh. good edit

this very good now its like a real manga poster!.. goodluck author

Beautiful sketch.....Beautiful work.....GL..

Looks like a winner.. great job

Congrats, beautifully done

Congrats for your first place, Adrik!

Congratulations. I think you've learnt something from improving this entry

congrats !!

Congrats!!

Dr. Slump fan? nice job

/squeaks/ I can't believe I bearly saw this! Thanks for the support guys!

well done.....

Love this piece.