Your sketch is very good and I like the colors, except the skin color, it's too yellow and looks like clothes. I will vote higher if this part is better. GL

really nice, I love it

I agree with langstrum...that's only suggestion for this work...good luck author

Maybe make the skin the color of her gloves would be more suitable, very nice manga cartoon though.

EDIT; this looks MUCH BETTER

If it is too dark why not lighten up the photoshop file? It actually looks nice the way you have it.

gud sketching man

I liked the darker one but still great job!

awwwsome....

This oozes awesomness, excellent artwork.

This looks MUCH better now, way better w/ the more subtle coloring. I saw it before and thought it was a great drawing, but the colors were too harsh. good edit

this very good now its like a real manga poster!.. goodluck author

Beautiful sketch.....Beautiful work.....GL..

Looks like a winner.. great job

Congrats, beautifully done

Congrats for your first place, Adrik!

Congratulations. I think you've learnt something from improving this entry

congrats !!

Congrats!!

Dr. Slump fan? nice job

/squeaks/ I can't believe I bearly saw this! Thanks for the support guys!

well done.....

Love this piece.

must be a Naruto fan lol

I've never watch Naruto but I know him and I like his appearance. Actually I'm a fan of Songoku in Dragon Ball, and this character has both the looks of them ^^

you must watch naruto lol.

Fantastic work....and yes Narutooooooooo....lol

Thank you erathion ^^. I will read that comic, for sure (my gf suggests me, too, lol)

Nice one....Good effects...

nice colors

Congrats for your second place, Langstrum!

Thank you for the congrats. This result is better than I expected, I'm so happy ^^

Congrats!!

Fantastic work...good luck author

it is best,keep it up

Nice work

Good drawing.. like the crop and bg too.

Good one......

Congrats for your third place, Chromathoughts!

Congrats!!

Reuploaded as problem with first upload

nice style !

Nice idea....

Congrats!!

She's cute and the colors are well combined. However, I guess that you can do a better job, seems like you did that quite quickly.

yup you are right i was so busy this week, hope i can get some time to edit =p

cool... Cute pic..

wht o why all manga girls looks so naughty...LOL...nice job author

She looks pretty....Nice work....

this one is great love the purple hair

Congrats!!