The Wise One - created by gamemastertips

Good job, look quite convincing. Maybe you should change the shadow below his head a bit, because it's not round like that. GL

Thank you langstrum, I agree. I'll try to fix it within the next couple of hours.

Maybe just liquify the tip of his nose downward a tiny bit. Good concept to turn him around!

Good idea too, pearlie. Thanks! Will work on it.

Fixed! How is it now?

Hmm, quite better but not desired to me. The shadow should be more or less like that around his neck --> \/. About his nose, it's still not realistic, you can use the bloat tool in liquify to make the center of his nose tip (whatever, I don't know how to call) to be rounder. Just find an photo and observed the real nose than you can figure it out

Great feedback--much appreciated. I think I have an idea what to do now. Thanks again.

Pretty good, nobody thought of turning forward the man!

Okay here goes...attempt number 3. Altered the shadow again and fixed the nose (hopefully). How is it now? The bloat tool didn't work as desired so I blended it with another asian man's nose.

Good idea, but do something to alter the symmetry on the face, so it doesn't look like you just flopped it...otherwise it's a good image.

Thanks, CMYK. What would you suggest? Adding some assymetrical details to the features? I already did a bit of work on the hair so that it doesn't look too mirrored but I'm not sure what else to do. :/ This is my first try at attempting something like this.

Author, just play around...remove some shadows, etc...it shouldn't be hard to alter the symmetry.

Okay I get what your saying now. I fixed it up a bit. Any better now? Again, thanks alot for the feedback.

Yes, that's much better...good luck!

Thanks!

Cool

nice work --- has been interesting to watch this this one evolve

perfect ! --- completely different and nice work ! Good luck author !!

Very nice...good luck author

Congrats!

congrats !!

Thank you everyone!

congrats for 2nd