thank you CMYK46 for your comment , could you please specifically tell me the fails?
the waves are used from another image and honestly I don't like them too ! but I am not a pro so...I guess I need some help and guidance

thank you very much Drivenslush

having your courageous words as comment really motivates me ... its nice of you

I don't know that how much time is left for correction ,on the other side I am busy right now so Its kinda hard for me to put all I have , But I will try and use your opinion to make it better
please tell me more so that I can learn more

also , I will use your words on my future works , it really makes sense and you are quite right about it
thanks again

Much improved, good work good fix and good luck

thanks Drivenslush !

thank you CMYK46
some of it's improvements are because of considering what you have mentioned before.
they really helped
thanks alot

thank you very much !

please tell me the down side too , so that I could do better in future

thanks again

thanks lvstealth

I will correct it

and I am happy that you enjoyed it

thanks george
I am glad that you like it

thank you very much Drivenslush

thank you very much George55
This is my first time participating and unlike you , I am completely rookie so... !
actually your word did make me happy alot , Thank you again
please in future contests guide me if possible

thanks for your guidance CMYK45
I will do as you say
thanks alot

please let me know if there is any other thing needing change.

thank you very much spaceranger

thanks george !