i don't think the butterfly wing is on the spot , but i don't have a suggestion about how it would be better hmm

That's a HUGE fairy!

Corrected links have been supplied by the author:
http://lisajen-stock.deviantart.com/gallery/3494483?offset=96#/d1g9b06 is the correct link for the fairy
http://toxicsoil.deviantart.com/art/Summer-Garden-200454696 is the correct link for the garden

Reply to Moss: LOL Yeah she's gi-nourmous. I guess I was tried to make her preportional instead of making her wee and little.

The wings probably would have looked better pointing upwards behind her head, at the moment it really doesn't looked joined to the girl....
I see the girl is rather large for a fairy lol.... im trying to figure out what you are feeding those plants in your garden to hold her up

Goodluck author :P

I put my source in the SBS Guide. It's there. I don't know where else I can put it. I fixed it.

I will figure it out. Please don't take it out.

I uploded it and I don't know why when I press source, it says I have no source. How do I upload my sources from my computer? I didn't find ay spec. instructions on it.

The flash you used when you took the picture is too contrasting for this image, since the light source is from the sunset behind her. You might be able to offset it a bit if you very slightly darken the dancer layer.

The edges are a bit too sharp, giving it a "cut and paste" look.

You can't "source" link from your PC, it only uses URL addresses.

There's too much going on- the main focus of the composition cannot be distinguished since elements are fighting with eachother= no harmony.
White element vs black element, both vertical vs green diagonal plant, my brain goes wha..huh !?!

You had a good idea with the back, why not take a photo of someones naked back and warp/ distort the clock on it, play around.
A Ranum chick usually does the trick IF she's not dating any recent / current entry.
But don't rely only on her - you need to do some work as well. Here's a nice back, her name's Candace Nirvana ( wow ):
http://mjranum-stock.deviantart.com/gallery/1854062?offset=24#/d1ae7k1

What do you mean Ranum chick? Thanks for the link, I will look into it. Last time I took something from Deviant art, I got taken out bc it was copywrighted. I am taking in what you said since this is my first stab into the surreal.

Oh, Ranum chick = female model posing for Marcus J. Ranum - brilliant man, kudos to him.
On deviant whatever user has "stock" in his name, provides his images free to use- but you have to credit him, so read his terms of use. Some ask link with the work or to be informed by mail, etc.
The link i gave you is usable since is mjranum-STOCK.

Thanks Grey M that is very useful information! I have to work today, but I will see if I can do that tip. Again thanks.

Ranum' stuff is amazing......

Grey, with the last breath of my body I joing deviantart and I fixed it. Full credit to Ranim for his incredible pictures and the models too. By the way his art is incredible!

Grey, took out the shadow. It's done!

Well it looks better cause of the shape of the girl, but in order to make it stand out more you should adjust the background with levels(ctrl L), making it darker and blur it a bit.
Instead of that bush for hair i would use these:
http://cgtextures.com/texview.php?id=24807&PHPSESSID=a93838f6f73551a605c8878ac381b63c
It's copyright free, it's already cut and would make a nice touch to the pic, chromatically and volumetrically.
Contest is over, so you can't edit your image no more, but you can make it for yourself and enter it in Mix manipulations contest or in your portfolio.
PS: try dodge & burn to create light & shadow on the body.

very good start for a wonderful collage, good luck!

It looks a bit floaty at the moment, a bit of shadow on the ground and a few pieces of grass showing infront of the swan would help give it the impression of sitting on the ground.

why not putting it on the water..i think that would be better..what do u think?

Thanks Ray, I fixed it. I never thought of that, but from now on I'll try to blend things into the pic. Wrock, mmmmm nah, I thought about placement and if it was on water it would sink. You probabley have more imagination than me.

The swan still has a lightly blueish tone. I suggest to take a look to this:

http://www.worth1000.com/tutorials/162206/introduction-to-match-color

It is a very useful tool and may help. The tone is the only flaw I see here

Nice job author, looks better!

The paper swan is lit from the opposite side of the real one (look at the shadow beneath the real swan's neck).

Mossy you are right. Didn't notice. I will look at that tutorial Syntek thanks. It does look better.