Thanks for your comment @mircea, the point is the car is an external mesh so I don't want to give the car protagonism in the composition, just presence, it's saying something and support part of the meaning of the work as a sideshow.

The top of the 'e' is missing it's depth, and the 'i' looks wonky where it intersects the leg of the person, but otherwise, the lettering looks very dynamic and fits the image well!

very nice for the first try >>>>
keep on working man >>>>
GL

Appreciate the advice/encouragement. Thanks and I'll check out the suggested software.