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langstrum says:

Great work, man!! Very nice result and the mood is so attractive to me. I gave you a high mark, but would be even higher if you take more time to make the face more asymmetric (I know you noticed that because this face now is not totally symmetric) but it can be performed better. Best of luck, I like it a lot

(5 years and 3167 days ago)

Merlin
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langstrum says:

Congrats on your third place!

(5 years and 3167 days ago)

Lost My Head
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langstrum says:

Congrats artgirl1935, I really like the color of this piece

(5 years and 3167 days ago)

Strawberry Island Pluckerbirds
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langstrum says:

Congrats Tucker! and thank you for making girafferry, so delicious

(5 years and 3167 days ago)

The Strawberry Giraffe
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langstrum says:

Congrats Jade for your third place

(5 years and 3167 days ago)

Set You Free
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langstrum says:

Congrats for your second place

(5 years and 3167 days ago)

The Big Boys Toy
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langstrum says:

Congrats Ben! your win was easily foreseen

(5 years and 3167 days ago)

The Mystic
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langstrum says:

Nice result. This technique is usually used in photography and quite easy to execute because the background, light is fixed

(5 years and 3169 days ago)

relaxing in the sun
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langstrum says:

Here comes high quality entry as I said . Unique work and well executed bro! I love the design of the necklace thingy . Good luck

(5 years and 3170 days ago)

The Mystic
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langstrum says:

That's a kind of lol creature ). The pose is just ... awesome ), and I like also the picture of the female creature on the wall . Seems like you don't have much experience in digital drawing but it's the great start . Welcome to digital drawing contests . Good luck!!

(5 years and 3170 days ago)

Relax!
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langstrum says:

you left something like a transparent tape near the middle top of the image, maybe a layer that shouldn't be there . Otherwise I do agree with the comments above. No one can compete you with this skill, congrats in advance!

(5 years and 3171 days ago)

behind the jungle
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langstrum says:

Congrats buddy! It's one of your best with this kind of construction

(5 years and 3174 days ago)

blood sucker
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langstrum says:

Congrats Nasir, ditto Anoop very well construction

(5 years and 3174 days ago)

RoboCop
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langstrum says:

The storm is coming to the highest level contest . Congrats for your second place!!

(5 years and 3174 days ago)

caution
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langstrum says:

Congrats Chad, that's predictable to me

(5 years and 3174 days ago)

Lonely:(
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langstrum says:

Congrats Tucker

(5 years and 3175 days ago)

The Chained Hand
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langstrum says:

Congrats Akassa!!!

(5 years and 3175 days ago)

Fearing the Future
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langstrum says:

Wow, I didn't know this win before, congrats my buddy, very great job ^^!!!

(5 years and 3176 days ago)

D-Day
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langstrum says:

I understand, and I agree with Drivenslush, you could PTS it very easily, take less than 5 minutes

(5 years and 3181 days ago)

Time_Light_Space
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langstrum says:

Very nice and colorful . I just afraid that maybe the man's shadow is wrong. Take a look on his shoulders you can see that the highlight is equal on both the shoulders, so that means the light on the two sides is similar --> his shadow should be right behind him, not the side shadow as in your image. Good luck

(5 years and 3181 days ago)

Time_Light_Space
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langstrum says:

Congrats !!

(5 years and 3181 days ago)

Wondering About The Other Side
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langstrum says:

Congrats buddy

(5 years and 3181 days ago)

Heaven City
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langstrum says:

If I were mod, I wouldn't remove this entry. Normally I just look into the SBS in the case the entry looked very strange and professionally done, especially after voting, it revealed the author just registered by the time of submitting that work and didn't have any other activity. That's the normal suspect for art thieves. But, in your case, we don't have to doubt about that and you have an acceptable reason for lacking the SBS. Here we have the greatest entry in this contest so far and it's the shame to remove it.

(5 years and 3181 days ago)

Rough Day
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langstrum says:

Author, dollmummy is right about the stock, it's the premade one for sure (the blending of the cloud and the scene is not good, that's from a sky image). But I don't agree that you just base on the this background. You used the non-manipulated part of the source and add the other sources to make your current background and you did a good job. However, rule is rule, the background source can't be used. I think the best way is finding the alternative background and email the author to ask him whether you can get the original background or not.

(5 years and 3182 days ago)

Guardian Angel
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langstrum says:

Wise choice of band name and nice arrangement, but the where is the light source? As I notice, the shadow on the sofa (near the center of the image) is the original shadow, so the light should come from the right side and a bit behind the sofa (you could make a lamp or something like that to be a light source). Base on that, the shadows behind the sofa and chair are not correct, they should be on the left of the objects. Also, since the light is not strong, the shadow inside that room is not that dark, just 70% of the darkness level you use is ok IMO. Good luck!

(5 years and 3182 days ago)

Simply Red
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langstrum says:

Still very meaningful to me. Could be entitled as "Insomnia". Very well done

(5 years and 3183 days ago)

Twilight Road
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langstrum says:

Quite good blending and interesting idea. My nitpicks are the light comes mostly from left sides and a bit from right side based on the body (that's not direct light), but on the face the light comes from the right side, so you should adjust the light on his face to be more uniform (increase the light from the left side). Also, the eyebrows are white but the hair is still dark (maybe it's still acceptable since he can colorize his hair lol). The last thing is the stroke around the body and face is still visible in Hi-Res, you need to clean it more (make some hair for him, so the head won't look like cut and paste). Hope this helps and good luck!
PS: if you're able to make the folds on his body skin as the one on his face, that will be great!

(5 years and 3185 days ago)

Elvis Still Lives
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langstrum says:

This girl has appeared so many times in Pxleyes . You could do the cleaning on the edge of the gate, some remaining parts of the source are still visible (white and black dots) and make these edges smoother a bit (now they are too sharp). Nice mood and imagination, tho. Good luck!

(5 years and 3187 days ago)

Wondering About The Other Side
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langstrum says:

I do agree with above comments . You could erase more on top of her hair and around some buildings, the dark stroke on her hair is still visible and the white halo around the building can be seen in the Hi-Res. Also, making some painted hair on her should be nice . It is the best so far, good luck!

(5 years and 3187 days ago)

Heaven City
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langstrum says:

Great, Kevin, try do to some more like that

(5 years and 3188 days ago)

Magical night
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langstrum says:

Congrats my friend

(5 years and 3188 days ago)

ThE LoSt aLiEn...
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langstrum says:

Congrats on your deserved win

(5 years and 3188 days ago)

Crane in Cattails
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langstrum says:

Congrats Nasir, great construction, keep it up

(5 years and 3188 days ago)

Swan
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langstrum says:

Congrats IDt8r! I just have a quick question for you: seems like you have bought a tablet? I remember that you used to use mouse for your entry, is that right?

(5 years and 3188 days ago)

Sk8r Boi
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langstrum says:

Congrats Laulei, hope to see you more in drawing contests

(5 years and 3188 days ago)

L
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langstrum says:

I see the idea behind this image, even though it's not eye catching. I have few suggestions, maybe they are helpful to you:
(1) the use of blending options in this kind of work normally don't make the nice effect (shadow, glowing, etc.), because they looks very artificial and they add the uniform effect on the whole layer. You can do the same thing by brush (that's the way I always prefer to do), if you have a tablet, that'll be great.
(2) I saw that you use the brush to colorize the eyes, but we still see the rough edges of the brushes. I suggest to use the low opacity, low flow brush, so each click of your mouse doesn't make noticeable effect on the image. With that setting, you can control the intensity of the color easily and it's like you're painting, just cost you a bit more time to repeat the action.
(3) to make the glowing dusts, you can use the scatter setting in the brush setting. Notice that to make the nice glowing effect, just choose the Range of 100%, so the light from the object will be gradually reduced from the center to the out side.
Keep trying, we're here to help.

(5 years and 3189 days ago)

GOOD GOES BAD
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langstrum says:

One of your best . The anatomy of this creature is just awesome! I suggest to do a bit more lighting, especially the side highlight, and darken the center part of the creature (which should be in the shadow area), so it will look more 3D. Also the shadow on the ground is not really accurate, but it's difficult to explain, it should be distorted more and straighten along with the light direction. This image is very potential, good luck my friend

(5 years and 3189 days ago)

Crystal Guardian
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langstrum says:

At least you should use different source compared to the tutorial to create that. It's not practice, that's copying, no creativity is seen here, not mention that the image of the given source looks like cut and paste

(5 years and 3190 days ago)

petra floating islands
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langstrum says:

Great combining photoshop skill and drawing, hmmm, even typography is good, too

(5 years and 3191 days ago)

Tower of Ugther
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langstrum says:

Now you make another masterpiece, congrats! The only thing I complaint is maybe one of the grass layer is in the wrong place, the one near the center of the image, at the same height with the head, it shouldn't be in front of other ones, and now it's levitated. I think you could remove that layer or put it to somewhere else. Good luck!

(5 years and 3191 days ago)

Swan
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langstrum says:

Very good. The only thing I would change if I were you is the composition, I prefer the tree in the lower position, leaving some air on top of the tree. This image reminds me Ponti55

(5 years and 3193 days ago)

New Life
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langstrum says:

I do think that we can make an exception here because in fact this effect doesn't contribute much to the result, and it's just visible in the hi-res. This piece of art is deserved to stay. Also, thank you for introducing this painting, I don't know it, what a beautiful work.

(5 years and 3193 days ago)

L
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langstrum says:

Very good remake version, but I do agree with Waz about the composition. Also, I'm curious about one thing: how can you make the noise effect on the image if not using the filter? This noise is very uniform on each layer you made, but different from the girl to the background.

(5 years and 3193 days ago)

L
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langstrum says:

I just wish you don't make the sharp edges around the girl, it makes she looked like a paper cut. Other than that, the center part of the painting was done well. Good luck, author!

(5 years and 3194 days ago)

Painting
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langstrum says:

Welcome back buddy . You did a good job on the rendition but I think the feather can be done better by smaller brush size of smudge tool, and the size of the bird a bit smaller will be better for the composition. Also, a more blurry background is better for the main focus of the image.Good luck !!
PS: I think you should check the second link, it doesn't lead to anywhere, at least with me, and the background looks like a pre-manipulated image because the mountain is similar to a 3D image.

(5 years and 3195 days ago)

The Roc
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langstrum says:

Congrats for your first top 3 place, keep it up

(5 years and 3195 days ago)

No Bounds
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langstrum says:

Congrats Swordfish

(5 years and 3195 days ago)

I am not stealing
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langstrum says:

Congrats Chad, that's the well deserved winning

(5 years and 3195 days ago)

The Great Escape
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langstrum says:

What o.O?!?!?! I'm sorry, but is it the parody version of Mona Lisa?

(5 years and 3195 days ago)

Modern Monalisa
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langstrum says:

Congrats Anastasia!

(5 years and 3195 days ago)

My horse!