9 comments received ( finished contests only ):
avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

The composition could have been better, "rule of thirds" and all that. Your focal point is somewhat overshadowed by all the green foliage...

(5 years and 1002 days ago)

butterflie
avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

nice, but the focus is a bit soft

(5 years and 1004 days ago)

scissors
avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Looks a bit out of focus.

(5 years and 1009 days ago)

scissors
avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

Cropped a bit tightly, and the focus is a bit soft

(5 years and 1038 days ago)

WEIGHTS
avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

Bags of milk? I've never seen that before

(5 years and 1038 days ago)

nameless
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its allso not supposed to have anything holding it in a pile and this pile seems to be held up by the "coolor" its sitting in

(5 years and 1039 days ago)

nameless
avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

Yes, I agree with friiskiwi

(5 years and 1040 days ago)

INVERSE
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

doesn't look like something you stacked for the photo.

(5 years and 1040 days ago)

nameless
avatar trevordsouza7

I somehow feel it looks better this way.. It's making a statement here..
" no matter how busy our lives are we should always find time to just stand and stare... "

GL author..

(5 years and 1041 days ago)

PURE WHITE
avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

Focus is a bit soft

(5 years and 1041 days ago)

NATURE N MANMADE
avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

WATER DROPLETS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(5 years and 1041 days ago)

RED  ROSE
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dem90 says:

BL:UR!!!!!

(5 years and 1043 days ago)

NATURE N MANMADE
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dem90 says:

Ugly background and you need work on your focusing. The flowers are a perfect subject,but all the busyiness in the backgrounds detracts from your attention to these lovely white flowers. Try and hold them up to a wall with a solid color, or even get construction paper or fabric and hag it behind the flowers. Go for solids, it will accent the flowers so much. There is already so much for the eye to look at with the flowers alone, you don't want a background that needs any attention

(5 years and 1043 days ago)

PURE WHITE
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dem90 says:

I'm not too happy with where the focus is, The closest and largest part of the flower is out of focus which is a major distraction in the photo

(5 years and 1043 days ago)

RED  ROSE
avatar solkee
solkee says:

Probably would look better if you straightened the image

(5 years and 1043 days ago)

BEAUTY
avatar nimeshjohri

Any relation to march?

(5 years and 1045 days ago)

NATURE
avatar nimeshjohri

How does it show that it's march?

(5 years and 1045 days ago)

RIVER
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

I would crop the bottom to loose the thing in the bottom right corner.

(5 years and 1045 days ago)

INVERSE
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

How does this relate to March?

(5 years and 1045 days ago)

NATURE N MANMADE
avatar trevordsouza7

nice!!

(5 years and 1080 days ago)

cake
avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

Looks tasty, but the shot would probably be better without the feet

(5 years and 1176 days ago)

cake
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

Nice flower, but no great mystery.

(5 years and 1177 days ago)

WHAT IS IT???
avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

What an exquisite looking cake and what an excellent photo - no flash glare, crisp focus, clear colors. Extremely well done!

(5 years and 1178 days ago)

cake
avatar Artifakts
Artifakts says:

Sorry but flash flatten your picture. Try to shoot without flash. If timepause is too long, set your camera on something stable.
Cables on the top left corner, Tapes behind the plate, frame at the right, plate a the botton right corner ... You should have clean your scene from disturbing objects ...
And for the end ... Why so centered ??? It should be more creative if you don't simply put the plate in the middle of the picture ...
Sorry for those comments author, it's just a way to help you suggest more creative pictures next time. And, of course, this is only my personal opinion

(5 years and 1232 days ago)

GELATINE
avatar jerostone
jerostone says:

Yes, if you write with it on a black piece of paper. A most poignant contrast.

(5 years and 1233 days ago)

PEN, PENCIL
avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

I've never seen a yellow ink pen before...Can you even read what you write with it? Nice photo!

(5 years and 1234 days ago)

PEN, PENCIL
avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

This photo leaves something to be desired in presentation, both the photo and the gelatine...It just kind of "sits there..."

(5 years and 1234 days ago)

GELATINE
avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

A bit blurry looking, the background is in such sharp focus, it steals attention.

(5 years and 1246 days ago)

nameless
avatar k5683
k5683 says:

let me rephrase that, where is your shadow?

(5 years and 1249 days ago)

nameless
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Elizude says:

Big round moon...

(5 years and 1305 days ago)

D MOON
avatar magicsteve

Thought this was showing some ground at first but after pulling it into lightroom I see its really a canopy of trees! Great work, author.

(5 years and 1326 days ago)

DARK
avatar BeardedWorm

Agree

(5 years and 1327 days ago)

LOOK UP
avatar magicsteve

Great subject matter and nice capture! As a suggestion, if you bump up the contrast a bit (increase the shadows in particular) and rotate the image so that it is not slanted on an angle I think it will really help you in the long run. All the best!

(5 years and 1327 days ago)

LOOK UP
avatar adeincyprus

damn, your'e good................how'd you figure that out.......

(5 years and 1333 days ago)

GUESS???
avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

I think I'd guess a termite mound

(5 years and 1333 days ago)

GUESS???
avatar adeincyprus

out of focus?........................ do we get a prize...............

(5 years and 1333 days ago)

GUESS???
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

a bad fuzzy photo?

(5 years and 1333 days ago)

GUESS???
avatar rbsgrl
rbsgrl says:

Lovely shot!

(5 years and 1334 days ago)

LONE ROAD
avatar rbsgrl
rbsgrl says:

Nice one! They look very happy!

(5 years and 1334 days ago)

HAND IN HAND AN ICE CREAM
avatar Angloaussiekiwi

Nice composition. watch your horizons. perhaps a slight rotate clockwise.

(5 years and 1340 days ago)

BEAUTIFUL
avatar Angloaussiekiwi

Nice diagonals

(5 years and 1340 days ago)

GLASS PYRAMID
avatar Angloaussiekiwi

looks like a spaceship.....cool shot

(5 years and 1340 days ago)

ROUND
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

Where is it?

(5 years and 1343 days ago)

BEAUTIFUL
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

Where is it?

(5 years and 1343 days ago)

GLASS PYRAMID
avatar trevordsouza7

nice idea...... agree with the inverted trails thing............ any ways great entry......

(5 years and 1345 days ago)

WHITE 4 SALT N BLACK 4 PEPPER
avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

Nice idea. A little OOF. Agree with friiskiwi. Might also have inverted the salt and pepper trails.

(5 years and 1345 days ago)

WHITE 4 SALT N BLACK 4 PEPPER
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

You have a great subject here, but if you want to enter competitions, you need to take more care.
1. Try using a plain background
2. crop the dark edge at the bottom
3. the image looks soft, needs more light to lower the ISO, it's very noisy.

An ordinary table lamp could have provided the light, and a tripod is a great help.

(5 years and 1347 days ago)

VASE
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

great idea, but the photo could be improved.
More contrast, lighter and a portrait crop.

(5 years and 1348 days ago)

WHITE 4 SALT N BLACK 4 PEPPER
avatar trevordsouza7

Yet another awesome pic \m/

(5 years and 1353 days ago)

WELCOME INN
avatar trevordsouza7

Awsome shot \m/ love the angle at with u clicked it \m/

(5 years and 1353 days ago)

STILL