159 comments given:
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Sander says:

What is the idea behind the image? Why did you use the map this way?

(5 years and 3394 days ago)

Race Alley
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Sander says:

The transition between the winter and the autumn is a bit too strong, also the water looks too bright.

(5 years and 3394 days ago)

Automn & Winter!
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Sander says:

Maybe change the horse on the left completely because its also out of perspective.

(5 years and 3394 days ago)

By The Creek
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Sander says:

The leftside of the buddha looks too dark compared too the rightside. Maybe lighten the left and darken the right a bit. Most of the buddha should be in shade because of where the lightsource is coming from.

(5 years and 3394 days ago)

Buddha in Autumn Alley
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Sander says:

Great style, congrats!

(5 years and 3394 days ago)

Giant Bees
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Sander says:

Congrats, good work!

(5 years and 3394 days ago)

From sea tales
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Sander says:

The fainted planet looks as if it stands in front of the clouds.

(5 years and 3426 days ago)

Watery Planet
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Sander says:

The idea is nice, but you could try to improve it by giving the texture depth and shading.

(5 years and 3426 days ago)

The Clay Face
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Sander says:

The cracks also need highlights at the rightside of the dark shadow lines.

(5 years and 3428 days ago)

You Crack Me Up, No Really
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Sander says:

Nice schoolboard, just maybe a bit to clean. Could use some wipes and other fainted textstuff.

(5 years and 3428 days ago)

Finals
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Sander says:

There are some lines that are a bit too blurry.

(5 years and 3428 days ago)

flower princess
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Sander says:

Great entry!

(5 years and 3428 days ago)

flower power
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Sander says:

Try to fade the background mountains and make the foreground less faded(fog not in the right place), thats a standard rule to give an illustration depth.

(5 years and 3428 days ago)

After The Rain
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Sander says:

Its a nice feel but a couple of things need more attention, shadow from the pilars and her dress and posture(anatomy).

(5 years and 3428 days ago)

Fantasy world
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Sander says:

Nice drawing, but there are some things that dont look right. For instance the mouth is too small and too high. There are some basic rules when drawing a head/face, its a good idea to study them.

(5 years and 3506 days ago)

Geisha
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Sander says:

Try to make her a bit less bright so that she better fits into the picture.

(5 years and 3519 days ago)

Favorite Pastime
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Sander says:

Great work! But the sticky note looks a bit to "clean". Maybe a little part of an edge would come of, or a little bit of a fold somewhere. And I was thinking that there should be a little bit of the edge from the paper where it is pressed on should come through.

(5 years and 3531 days ago)

gone
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Sander says:

I think you did a great job!! Maybe next time make the sci-fi sky the usual color, black. Then you can make some blueish/purpleish gasclouds and some bright stars wich bring the light into the room.

(5 years and 3531 days ago)

Staring out
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Sander says:

Dont want to eat that!

(5 years and 3531 days ago)

Don
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Sander says:

A bit to simple, its not really fighting back.

(5 years and 3531 days ago)

Peach Skull
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Sander says:

Now this is an unfair fight!! Good job.

(5 years and 3531 days ago)

Egg Attack! w/Peach & Bagel
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Sander says:

Right on theme. But Ive seen this kind of image a lot, letting a face come through the object. Thats ok, but you could have perfected it a bit. For example he doesnt have lips or eyelashes or a tongue...

(5 years and 3531 days ago)

try to eat me
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Sander says:

Wanted to give high marks, but its to alike.

(5 years and 3531 days ago)

break fast
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Sander says:

Good picture, but hes not fighting back. Would have been great if his head was turned towards the fingers trying to bite them of.

(5 years and 3531 days ago)

Korndawg
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Sander says:

Great idea, ok picture. Very boeddhist like. But you kinda made your own theme, food that doesnt fight back.

(5 years and 3531 days ago)

Scene of the crime
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Sander says:

You can still see that the dog is photographed with a flash. Also he is not fighting back.

(5 years and 3531 days ago)

Ouch!!!!
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Sander says:

I think the planets under the clouds is great, it gives a surreal feel to the image. Don't stop being creative like that. The blurry planet on the left is something else, keep it sharp like the rest of the image.

(5 years and 3532 days ago)

The Perfect Cicles of...
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Sander says:

The blending of the two images could be better, there are some dark shadowed areas where highlights on the water should be. Its also hard to see where the water stops and the rocks begin. If you would put some shadow lines and some foam lines where the waves hit the rocks, it would make a big difference.

(5 years and 3532 days ago)

Elemental view
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Sander says:

Great idea. It would have been nice to use the "s" from the source as it was, and Im missing the shadow from the source image.

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

Save Our Earth
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Sander says:

Great job, but why the dark border completely around. Only the arm coming from the shade would be enough. And maybe fix the dark shadowlike line around the thumbpart of the hand.

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

Tatoo
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Sander says:

Great imagination!

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

Branch
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Sander says:

There is something wrong with the perspective and depth in this image. It looks now that the distance from the bottom of the bottle to the wall is a couple of feet. But then there would be no shadow from the bottle on the wall at all. What you could do is drop the horizontal line between the wall and the table untill just a bit above the bottom of the bottle. And a shadow also makes a reflection onto a shiny surface(=mirror).

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

Vino vines
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Sander says:

The picture is great, the text could be more powerfull.

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

Childrens
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Sander says:

Not a good picture for your statement, looks to much WOII for me.

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

STOP VIOLENCE AGAINTS WOMEN
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Sander says:

There's a part where the cowboy was that looks blurry. Also the cat needs some improvement, it needs more contrast.(I think its because of the camera's flash)

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

El Gato Loco
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Sander says:

Also try to fix the dark edge around the left plant and in this case turn down the contrast cause the colors are to vivid.

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

Window Ledge
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Sander says:

Very good, but crystals in the tree!?

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

crystal city
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Sander says:

Very interesting strong shapes.

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

Floating Kingdom
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Sander says:

Good job, but the picture lacks cohesion.

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

Glinda
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Sander says:

Nice, rocket does look a bit dull.

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

Cloud base
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Sander says:

Looks great, but agree with other comments about the white line.

(5 years and 3533 days ago)

Magician Resort
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Sander says:

Very cool idea, you could work on making the image more interesting.

(5 years and 3536 days ago)

Chicken Legs
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Sander says:

Try to get the transition from the cactus to the tree a bit smoother.

(5 years and 3536 days ago)

Dustree Victory Dance
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Sander says:

Awesome feel to it..

(5 years and 3536 days ago)

silhouette in gold
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Sander says:

Great, maybe the merries in the distance are made a bit to small.

(5 years and 3536 days ago)

Cruel Mirage
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Sander says:

Great job, light on the merry looks amazing this way

(5 years and 3536 days ago)

Vintage ride
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Sander says:

Looks really good.

(5 years and 3536 days ago)

Merry Go Wild
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Sander says:

Nice job, very good clean image.

(5 years and 3536 days ago)

Girl
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Sander says:

Nice, but the lightbeam coming from the window looks a bit strange this way.

(5 years and 3536 days ago)

Night Time Barn
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Sander says:

Its such a beautiful entry...guess where Im from...

(5 years and 3539 days ago)

Holland