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MossyB says:

The overall composition is flat and too centered, with too much uninteresting hills on the side, and not enough focus on the person, or the tiny buildings in the background. Cropping some off the left would redirect the angles so the eye isn't dragged down to the center dip, and would allow more visual movement around the image.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Gazing from the Mountain Top
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MossyB says:

Very rich color, without being artificially over saturated. Nice focus. Well done!

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Crimson leaves
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MossyB says:

Too "target centered." Cropping a bit off the right, and a little off the bottom would help give this more of a "rule of thirds" positioning, and make it a bit more visually interesting.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Canoe
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MossyB says:

I really like that each sample is different from the rest. A small touch, but visually effective. The high reflection of the box in the lower right foreground is a bit overkill, though.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

DNA museum
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MossyB says:

One of the best black and white photos I have seen in a very long time. Excellent values!

EDIT: You've changed your entry. Pity.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Waiting
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MossyB says:

Great focus, the leaf and the asphalt are both crisp and clean looking. Well done!

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Autumn Leaf
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MossyB says:

Excellent job of positioning the stand to prevent the candle from over dominating the image. Great photo!

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

The potion...
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MossyB says:

This is such a dramatic looking image, truly well done!

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

First real view of Autumn
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MossyB says:

Very nice composition! The balance of values really help the eye travel around the image.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Solitary
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MossyB says:

Not enough emphasis on the hood ornament or the logo. The reflection of the legs, and all the light reflections on the hood take away from the supposed subject.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Morris
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MossyB says:

The reflection of the photographer is more dominant as a focal point than the logo.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Porsche
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MossyB says:

I can almost hear the wind rustling between the stalks. Good job!

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Autumn corn
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MossyB says:

Nice composition, good angle.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Parking
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MossyB says:

Great lighting and shadow consistency. Well done.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Unseen beach
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MossyB says:

Wonderful capture, the spark trails are great!

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

firework
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MossyB says:

This is an excellent effort, and perfectly on theme, in my opinion. Wonderful work.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

CONVERSE 1988 SPORTS CAR
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MossyB says:

It seems a bit too "target centered," with the dark values over dominating the image. Cropping off about half of the dark shape on the left, and a bit off the bottom would give this a lot more visual movement, and make the dark tree on the right in the background more dynamic.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Relax Under A Sassafras
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MossyB says:

The color adjustment looks too contrived.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Drops
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MossyB says:

This composition would be stronger if you cropped the dark on the left, making the golden center more of a contrast with the dark on the right, rather than centering it.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

An Autumn Sky
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MossyB says:

Wonderful photo. I'd crop off just a wee bit more of the top, bringing it down closer to the wings, as that flash spot and the hood centerline distract from the logo and the ornament.

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

RR
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MossyB says:

I'd crop this just a wee bit more to get rid of the disconnected branch bits at the top. Otherwise, this is a great photo, with good balance of colors and values, and the lonesome mallard a wonderful focal point!

(5 years and 2771 days ago)

Autumn at the Duck Pond
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MossyB says:

Very nice constrasts. The values make this a successful image.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

A lack of Chlorophyll
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MossyB says:

Great photo, wonderful focus - everything and everyone is so crisp and sharp!

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

All tables taken
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MossyB says:

Simply excellent use of negative space. That wide expanse of sky works SO well in this photo!

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Scarecrow
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MossyB says:

Really nice composition. That cone, positioned where it is, does a wonderful job of attracting the eye, with the clouds, horizon line curve, and rocks then balancing out the image, and pulling the eye back over to the right, until the cone then commands you to look over at it again...I really enjoy this image!

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Strange Cone
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MossyB says:

I thought it might be two cats...This could really be a much stronger image if you gave it a bit of a color correction for the yellow tint from the incandescent lighting, and adjusted the levels enough to show the secret agent resting for his next assignment...

Actually, just applying a cooling filter to compensate for the yellow tint brings out the contrasts enough for the cat to separate himself from the chair and occupy it, rather than meld with it.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Some nerve...
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MossyB says:

I like the overexposed values, it helps emphasize the circle theme, while removing some of the "bunch of wood" look.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

woods
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MossyB says:

This works quite well in black and white, nice contrasts and visual texture!

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Occupied sand
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MossyB says:

This is a lovely work. The only problem is the shadow on the right hand cheek of the girl. It is too pronounced in comparison to the other shadows on that side, and makes the lion look like a photo that she has her face next to. If you lighten that just a bit more, so that the edges blend better, it will be more consistent with the other edges on the right hand side, and make the image more integrated. Still, a very good chop!

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

a special friend
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MossyB says:

Love the bit of color in the reflection on the logo. Sets the composition off by providing a bit of dynamic "oomph" to a good perspective. Well done!

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

MP4-12C
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MossyB says:

Good find for the theme, but the composition is exceptionally bland, with the wheel "target centered" as it is in the picture plane. This could have been much more dramatic if you had photographed it from a different angle, utilizing the "rule of thirds," or even changing the perspective by getting down on the ground to utilize the color and contrasts to better effect.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

red wheel
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MossyB says:

The angle of the photo really doesn't enhance the subject. There are too many angles pointing out that it's tilted.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Decorations
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MossyB says:

Truly wonderful focus. Crisp and balanced, the details of the ornament are easy to see and make this a beautiful capture.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Not in my garage
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MossyB says:

The lighting (flash?) is too bright, and distracts from the circles. Interesting looking object, though. Spice rack?

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

UFO Close-Up!
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MossyB says:

Great composition, nice overall image!

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Under the Lamp
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MossyB says:

Nice angle. The paint chip is an interesting accent, without over dominating the image. If you had photographed this emphasizing the other side, that would not have been the case. Well done.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Found On Road Dead
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MossyB says:

This would be stronger if you crop out the grill lines on the side and straighten the emblem. It tilts slightly down to the right, and those horizontal lines on the sides are distracting.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

The Age of the Ram
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MossyB says:

Thank you for the informative history of this emblem! It's a nice photo, but understanding it a bit more enhances it's visual beauty.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Austin
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MossyB says:

This photo has such a quiet and peaceful feel to it, mood wise. But the overall composition is somewhat boring, with the trees all the same basic height, and the symmetrical positioning, with the horizon line of the lake bisecting the photo almost directly in the middle. Too much was cropped off the top, so that the trees on the right look incomplete, and the darks on either side command the eye to the center of the image, where there is essentially nothing visually happening. If you cropped the right hand side, so that the brighter green was the "border," and took some of the bottom off, moving the horizon line from the "target center," it would help this visually, by making the eye move a bit more, and the lovely little golden leaves on the right would have more of an impact.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Lake
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MossyB says:

Very lovely photo. Simple, yet dramatic, with great focus and color. The sky looks blue in the background (as it should).

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Bursting Bittersweet
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MossyB says:

This would have been better with more illumination from beneath - the flash at the top draws too much attention to the wood, rather than the jars.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Organized Jarhead
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MossyB says:

The background is really interesting in this photo - it almost fights with the subject for dominance.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Off the Board
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MossyB says:

This is a cute photo. I would suggest cropping it just a bit more on the right and across the top, to remove the small bits of whatever and the rocking horse in the background, and bring the focus more onto the sleeping dog.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Occupy the Couch!
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MossyB says:

Really nice leading lines with the edges of the kayak and the rope. Very well composed photo.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Double occupancy
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MossyB says:

Really nice composition, great sense of proportion here.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

The diver
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MossyB says:

Love the zipper and pockets in the front!

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

TURBO DENIM
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MossyB says:

The use of the carrot leaves in the background is almost negligible, since you can't make out what they are. This is a lovely image, but the use of the contest source photo is very, very hard to discern within it. Submitting it to the stylus contest would be more logical, since you can somewhat make out that contest source image...Still, an excellent effort, combining many disparate images into a cohesive picture.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

The Tree
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MossyB says:

Good job. Humorous take on the contest source.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

vouyeurism
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MossyB says:

Very nice composition, the values of the limbs really make this work well.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

Nothing gold can stay
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MossyB says:

This is very pretty, but the green leaves in the foreground look too blue. A wee touch of color adjustment would help immensely.

(5 years and 2772 days ago)

End of the Rainbow