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Lost
by Amanda Dwyer

I liked you,
then forgot.
I loved you once,
No More.
I hate you now,
forever.

I know what you did to me,
you fucked me up real bad.
so open your eyes so you can see,
you screwed me up, you're all i had.

so now i wander, lonely and cold,
i tie the noose around my throat.
my life is ending, my soul is sold.
im leaving now, and heres my note.

and now im lost. (5 years and 2125 days ago)

7 Sources:

avatar Eladine
Eladine says:

a good chop, i dont wanna use the word nice rly since its such a cruel and dramatic end however your work is very good. very good poem too.

avatar Drivenslush

pass out the razor blades (LOL) sorry, couldn't resist LOL good luck author

avatar weatherspc

Awesome Job !!!

avatar pixelkid
pixelkid says:

Sad, raw and real. Nice job author!

avatar madamemonty

Congrats

author says:

Thanks everyone!

avatar Giallo
Giallo says:

Very nice job

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