the hair looks really bad in high ress, the hand thats holding the fork is partly erased the fork goes straight thru her thumb and pinky lol, her cutout seems a bit shaky, the colors are okay, I would have added fire behind her though. I think you had a really great idea, the execution just needs to be a little better. holding off my vote for now.

thx for ur comment eladine, ur were right bout the hand lol, missed that, changed that and the hair also, i think the fire bhind here is a personal thing but thx for the suggestion

yes great improvement author except the thumb the fork now goes behind her thumb instead of her holding it. the pinky is right done now, just use a hard brush to erase some of the thumb and use burn to create a small darker edge where the fork comes out through the bend of her thumb. (hope that made sense) and yes the fire behind her is a personal thing and does not change the quality of your work, just a matter of different taste i think perhaps if u have the time you could let a tail come from behind her a little bit.