A bit too dark on the edges, you can't see her awesome shoes!

Hahaha... Ok Mossy, I'll be fixed in a few minutes... Thanks!

I hope to give a better view ... the shoes!

This has a surreal and a beautiful look to it. Nice work, author!

I like the image but i dont think you should have put the hair so straight upwards from the back of her head. I keept looking at what was wong with the girl why she looked so odd, then i saw it.. its the hair it gives the neck a real weird angle for some reason while you didnt really changed that at all. I love the mood u added to the picture and the color changes. The motion you ahve added fits perfectly too! I would have added the watch a lil more to the middle closer to her hands though. but overall its very nice, high score!

Thank you Danielle, for your constructive criticism.
As soon as I can will do something about the hair. I really do not "feel" the fault, so it was so.
But I agree with you!
Thank you!!!

I made some modifications:

The clock approached her hands.
I have no experience with hair...
So... Duplicated twice the model's hair and worked the size and the edges with smudge.

Tks.

looks better to me now author

Oh, she'd better land on something soft! Hehehe brilliant idea

Thank you again, Danielle!

Thanks Jim, I'm glad you enjoyed!