Painted Vase and Lonely Orchid - created by MossyB


Painted Vase and Lonely Orchid
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author says:

Thank you so much for the suggestion!

avatar Glockman
Glockman says:

Good design but rather flat looking, needs shadow under the vase, the stem should be leaning on the opposite side inside the vase as the weight of the flowers would designate

author says:

If you look, perhaps checking the Hi-Res, you will see that the shadow is to the left behind the vase. Since it is sitting on a level surface, there is no shadow beneath it...
The stem is curved from the weight of the flowers, and hence bends from the base on the left inside the vase, to the right, with the arc then continuing back to the left outside the vase...

avatar pixelkid
pixelkid says:

Creative and cool. Would love to have seen slightly softer edges to the vase and where wall meets surface. Perhaps a slight soft darkening on right side of edge of vase to show more cylindrical shape...but nonetheless...very nice job.

author says:

Since it was supposed to be a tabletop near, but not up against the wall, a softer edge would have helped, you're right.

A shadow on the right side of the vase would have been difficult with the light source highlight where it is, but possibly down near the bottom...

Thank you all for your comments, it is SO helpful to get the viewpoints of other eyes than my own, and helps me improve my skills with every entry!

avatar kushpatel
kushpatel says:

good try

avatar SarahJM
SarahJM says:

Great work. Artistic and creative. Fab colours and it includes my favourite subject - flowers!

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