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nice drawing of the sash.. GOOD LUCK!!!
Since the light is shining from the side, the shadow on top of the pants (??) looks out of place. Also, the curve is distracting, as if it is his knee beneath the fabric, the anatomy is way off.
The wing on the left should be showing some shadow from the wing on the right. It's too bright along the top near the body.
The shadow on magicsteve's face is pizza shaped, not grapes, and the grapes are too illuminated on the "dark side" - they should be brighter closer to the viewer, and darker on the top, where the hand shadow would cast.
the folds of the cloth is blurry.
suggest:
1) sharpen the folds
2) more contrast for the whole image
3) add a more contrasty 'angel ring' , now not bright enough
... he really needs to slim-down and cut down on the food, in order to take flight
this is absolutely great work author
love your work here
fav for you good luck
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