It's so Lovely..I LOVE it.. Especially the reflection inside it..

There are some "smudgy" dark artifacts along the inner eyelid edges that are slightly detracting, especially along the top, but this is a very original idea, I especially light the subtle bird reflection in the eye.

awesome work...

Wow, it's either a very difficult plastic surgery or very sophisticated mascara. She could be a phoenix goddess with beautiful eyelash. In my opinion, it might be nice to have fine shadow underneath the eyelash to make it a bit more realistic. Apart from it, it's a very nice work

Thanks for all your comments and suggestions!! I take them all on board, thanks.

nice..

I am with MossyB with the smudge and all but I must say you did a wonderful work author as well! best of luck!

Congrats!!

Nice Congrats