my sweet home - created by kushpatel


my sweet home
Favs: 14SBS: n/aHi-resRank: 2/13Score: 67.9% (39)10603 views

(5 years and 1222 days ago)

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avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Very nice mood, but there are too many duplicated balloons. They all look the same, and distract too much from the rest of the image. I'd eliminate the largest and the smallest, and place the medium sized one below where the largest one now is. That will help direct the viewer's focus around the focal point of the shoe and the girl.

I'd also tone down the red car, as it competes too much with the red shoe, directing the eye off to the side.

The edge of the steps where they meet the door on the shoe is too hard edged, looking very cut and paste, a bit of blur will help there.

avatar RIPSAW
RIPSAW says:

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Better, but changing the shoe to blue still has the car too dominant, because now your focal point of the shoe blends too much with all the blue of the background...
The steps look much better, though, and the balloons are improved.

author says:

thanks for your support Mossy B

author says:

@Mossy B
edited 2nd time buddy
now looks better or not?

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

I've only seen this version, but it looks good. Car seems small compared to the girl. Flip the small balloon so the highlight is correct. GL author!

avatar tk
tk says:

Wow, I like the story it tells, nice work!

author says:

@CMYK46
edited 3rd time friend
i think it looks better

avatar erathion
erathion says:

Very nice work author with lovely mood...IMHO car is only thing that don't fit in this scene, but without the car that part of the image would be to empty...also car need darker under shadow, especially in back part cause now look like floating...fix that and u will have very cool image author...best of luck

author says:

@erathion
thanks for your suggestion friend

avatar mehul
mehul says:

superbb work....n nice thinking author...

avatar olseado
olseado says:

Like a fairytale. GL!

avatar DanielaOwergoor

I think there are many people confusing things.
I say this because of comments about size of the car, the girl ...
It's like tennis "home" was overlooked.

Everything is surreal, then, in my opinion, no matter if the girl is bigger than the car, if the balloons are similar, if the car is very small. It is a surreal theme, guys! But, is my personal opinion!
The work is fabulous! I loved it! Fav!
Congratulations, author!

avatar aheman
aheman says:

suggest blur n fade partially the balloons to the background, this will enhance the focal point on the girl n shoe-house...

great image congrats!

avatar cabldawg71

I agree with Daniela. This is a fine chop to you Author

avatar neo2011
neo2011 says:

nice concept author gl

avatar dekwid
dekwid says:

yeah....my favorite mood on this pic, I love the dark greenish tone.....! and my fav entry too....oh well the best so far...good luck...

avatar CorneliaMladenova

Astounding

avatar minnie
minnie says:

Congrats kush!!

avatar spaceranger

Congrats!!

avatar olseado
olseado says:

Congrats!!

author says:

thanks irene, spaceranger and Olesya

avatar artgirl1935

Cograts!!! Great job!

avatar DanielaOwergoor

Congrats!

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