King Of Pirates - created by sasikanth123


King Of Pirates
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avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

This image is very inconsistent and poorly put together. The perspective and proportions of the skeleton are too stretched. The entire image looks like it is being projected onto a gauze curtain (is it supposed to be raining?) and the woman and lighthouse are totally out of place for the image - They are both lit from the left, while the skeleton in front is lit from above, the sea king is lit from the right top, and the ship is lit from the mid to lower right. The figure in the lower RH corner is backlit and almost impossible to clearly make out at all.

It's an interesting concept, but it needs a lot of clean up with more attention to detail.

avatar Hayato
Hayato says:

Ouch, MossyB, really ouch... but agreed with the corrections. Esp the fire... I don't know how to describe, a little yellowish white of true fire would make those fires realistic.

Agreed with the interesting concept. Looks so glooomy though. Good luck~!

author says:

tried and changed the fire....@Hayato,MossyB's comment is made on the image which i changed entirely.........thanks for the suggestions guys. actualy iam new to photoshop and also new to pxlyse.

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Hayato says:
"Ouch, MossyB, really ouch..."

That's exactly my sentiment! Since this is a competition, rather than a display website, entries need more attention to basics like lighting and composition and consistency...
Getting rid of the lighthouse and the stretched skeleton helped the composition a LOT, but the woman is still too brightly lit from the opposite side of your other main elements. Her leg could be a lighthouse by itself...

The rain looks much better, but the yellow smudgy strokes in the corners are distracting, and the totally desaturated image except for the king and the yellow smudges does not give the image an overall integrated feeling.

Better, though.

author says:

thanks MossyB, i have worked on it.....

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Really better now! Good effort!

avatar hereisanoop

thumbs up to mossy... good luck author

author says:

all credits to mossy....

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