Really Nice... but some of your lines need a little work on the left side... around the sword and folds in the jacket... I'd also suggest you darken the inside of the sleeves.

also:-

the gun on this shoulder ?? I'm not sure about that... there's nothing to suggest it's slung... just added

and:-

I think the squirrel and ship needs to be moved slightly further apart... the middle 'pole' (not a boat expert :P) should ideally come to the second 'third' for a better composition... or atleast move away so the ship doesn't go beyond the squirrel... the little bit poking out is just off putting when you're looking at the details on the main subject.

Nice piece and great mood!... good job!

EDIT: Just noticed it doesn't have a tail... I'd put that back in... as it's a squirrel.... ???

This is hilarious, author, a great idea, however there are a couple of nitpicks - somehow the Civil War emblems on his pants don't go with pirate attire, IMHO. And yes, agree his gun should probably be slung in his belt. JamesD, those 'poles' are called masts, and the squirrel must be on a different ship, so agree that the ship in the distance could be moved to the right a bit, and maybe reduced in size to see more of it. Moving the ship would also take that flag away from Jack's nose. Lots of humor points here, author and great mood.

True the tail is missing, really good concept tho.

pretty amazing...

oh well, thanks for commenting,....> james,..I like your comment, it is very constructive and much contributing,..so is pearlie's comment.....> nator, niks, akassa,....thanks.....
oooh...the tail,....Jack just hides it inside his pant,....he is doing undercover to be a mouse....LOLs....hehehe.....

Hah well author guess your right about the tail, just use your imagination... Though I would say he lost it during a fight

Gl author !

Cool composition, better when viewed in hi-res. Congrats

very nice work

i love it ,good luck

i want to read the book, ...wonderful.

very well done., beautiful entry.....

very good color contrast , good luck!

What a clever and tricky rodent!

Fantastic work author...well done

Congrats on first place!

Congrats on first place

Congrats for your first place, Dekwid!

Congrats mehearty.... really well done

Congrats!!

congrats!!

Wow, Congrats