Prisoner's hope - created by marina08


Prisoners hope
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He's been held prisoner for so long he doesn't remember the reason any more, or his name.
He just holds on to this post-card, hoping to be free soon.

No other sources used. (5 years and 2096 days ago)

avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

Is he being held prisoner by dwarfs? He looks a little big. Suggestion: remove the table entirely and make him a little smaller and more center to the room but keep the window in the image. His edges are a little jagged when viewed in high res. Easy fix: liquefy/push tool to push them smooth, and hey, why not put some bars on the window? Just my opinion on that suggstion and optional but it might help match your description better. Kudos to originality

author says:

Thanks for the comment! He is big as I wanted to make him appear close to the ''lens''. Maybe I should blurr the background a bit to make it look it is far? I did put some bars on the window but maybe I should try to make them more distinguishable.

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Scale is off, figure is too large...

avatar annabat
annabat [banned] says:

Proportions are off (with the legs), but the mood is great. I don't agree that he's too large, but painting on the ground is much too light. It doesn't QUITE fit.

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expression on the face has come out well author... well tried with lighting... but looking at the lighting on man, there is'nt a light source to cast tht bright light on the wall abv the arch.. also i wud hv lessened the brightness of light on the wall around the window and match it with the light on the floor imediate to the window, where there should logically be more light...(as light travels from window to floor, instead of spreading around the wall..) hope my explaination made any sense to you...

avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

The bars are great! But it would still look better to just remove the table, put the focus on the prisoner and make the cell appear more like a cell.

author says:

Thank you all for your comments! They were really helpful, although with the holidays season I didn't have much time to work on my entry.

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