What a bummer...you'd get a better vote if you wrote something positive...
PS: At least it could have a background...

reminds me of the dear John letter ad. nice entry. GL

cool!!

meh. i don't like a pen with a very thin point that writes a so large calligraphy. it sounds weird..

evil evil evil humor... you must be destroyed (lol) reading the whole message is just hysterical LOL

Background looks lots better!

not liking the story, but interesting use of source

Sad story... But a great job! Add some shadows under the hand, and it will be superb! GL

oh no no.......shes got to take the kids!!!