If you transformed the orange bit and give it height, and some reflection would go some way to an egg. good attempt tho. Reply »

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it looks like the yolk is dipping in slightly, the shape looks concave, but it's a nice idea. Good luck! Reply »

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I thought that I was looking at an orange plate at first and did not see an egg. But I understand now. Your shadows and highlights are misplaced. The shaddow on the left/inside yolk give it a concave look and the highlights around the back reinforce the concave. Dark colors make things look further away while lights bring them closer. I would find a way to reverse your shaddow/highlights. I hope that helps. Keep up the good work! Reply »

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i like this image a lo! its just that, the egg yulk is too blurry and it kinda looses its ...depth imo but if it was sharper, it would be awesome! Reply »

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thanks everyone for your comments. I'm not good at a lot of things but I like to try. All your comments help thanks Reply »

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Nice idea! Jellyegg Reply »

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Author.. I sent you a Private Message that might help.. this is a really great Idea Reply »

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aha cool! i like your thinking... possibly lighten some of the reds in the yolk to give it more of the yellowy colour that an egg has. Reply »

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fun work Reply »

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Clear picture of breakfast,very creative Reply »

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