Soliloquy of Destitude - created by ponti55


Soliloquy of Destitude
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I wanted to name this entry Ethereal Vision, but i didn;t want to make it more cliche than it already is. (5 years and 2031 days ago)

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avatar OliviasArts

on the left side of the girl it is looking like a cut out... its the lighting thats doing it too her so not your fault see if you can play with that spot a bit to blend into rest of image goodluck, its a nice image.

avatar robvdn
robvdn says:

Very nice image! You could make it more dramatic by adding shadows on the outside of the girl, there's a lightsource on the back which can justify that. And you can use the orb as a lightsource coming from the front which lights the front of the girl. This will attrack more attention to the inside of the image.

Just a tip

author says:

Thanks guys i'll try to fix that

avatar mariosilva

very nice chop but i think light on the face shouldn'tīt be so intense beside that wonderful job, good luck

author says:

Her face wasn;t so intense originally, then i applied the soft glow effect, and i liked the fact that her face was that bright because it made it seem like there was a real surge of power from the Orb, and that looked kind of nice to me. Thanks for commenting though

avatar spaceranger

I don't understand the title. A soliloquy is a dialog by a person as if they were alone. i.e. " To be or not to be...". Destitude isn't a word. Destitute is poverty or having no possessions. Curious as to what you meant. Image is interesting, girl looks a little washed out. Try as robvdn suggests that would improve the effect.

author says:

Destitude has meanings beyond poverty, such as destruction or pain, and mixing it with a soliloquy added class, i was creating juxtaposition, this can also be seen withe colours in her hand, representing fire and water - other juxtaposing elements. Thanks for commenting

avatar Tuckinator

wow nice i like the whole fantasy genre

avatar sparklen
sparklen says:

I love this! Don't change a thing! Bravo!!!!!

avatar hereisanoop

i liked it very much. fine work...

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Good, but the lights in the hands should be reflected in the ball...

avatar mariosilva

bro is what i think ,now is better,but before light in her face was too much white, but this is wonderful image u know that i just try to "help u a bit" but i know that u are an artist and u dt need help, regards my friend

avatar thefinalcut

Nice image! I agree with cmyk that the light should reflect off of the ball. Otherwise, a solid entry.

avatar Eladine
Eladine says:

very nice, I just want to say, i dont know what that thing is halfway down the statue for the ball but it looks like the edge of a sidtable or something... please get rid of it o.o; its bumpy cut out at leats it looks like that., i think without it ur image looks way better... holding off my vote for now..

avatar Eladine
Eladine says:

nice work yes it looks better without that table thing

no avatar

love this style of work. no other comments that have not already been highlighted .. GL

avatar PSA2009
PSA2009 says:

Creepy!! i like good luck

author says:

Thanks everyone, Eladine - i made some changes

avatar genuine2009

nice

avatar RickLaMesa

i like the lighting

avatar Lelaina
Lelaina says:

Beautiful composition!

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