I would ditch the tv and the text in favor of more detail and clarity. remember show dont tell.

I think it looks nice. Like an old 50's sci-fi on an old TV

I like the nostalgic approach, works well IMO!

I want a bag of Popcorn... and kool-aid (we were poor) LOL It's very cute (I don't know how you resisted not including the wonderful wooden legs of the original photo of the TV, they are terrific, may want to consider including them just to give this a bit of a boost... (but that's just me) Simple just isn't me LOL. Very good work... I think I can even hear the speaker

It is a nice old fashioned image... Good job... Love the TV

Please fix your links. They should lead to the actual image used, not the hosting site. As you can see, your image is very low resolution & pixelated. You should be able to fix that and resubmit.

How do you find the I'd ideal link please

err umm.. all I see is a big black square... is that right?

As you might have noticed turning your image into a black entry does not mean your entry will be removed from the contest. Replacing your original with a neutral image (in this case black) is seen as forcing the mods to remove an entry. In such a case mods DO NOT remove such entry, they do remove the votes already made on your original entry so members can vote again (as they always do if an entry is dramatically changed). In the end this will result in a low score of your entry and a dip in your average score.

It is better to leave the original entry in the contest and try to solve problems from there. Mods are ALWAYS willing to help you to solve problems with your entry, as are our Gold Members (that's why they are here!). Please do take advantage of that!