nice concept

Good thinking and nice composition, but it needs some work to look convincing. The left edge of the sketch book looks strange. The small strip of paper should not be visible at all. And the color of the sketch does not match the color of the pencil tip.

Good repair, but the original was a bit washed out. Try upping the darks & midtones w/ levels to get better contrast.

I have actualy changed the brightness/contrast on purpose because I think the photo comes way more to life now and you can see a lot more detail. Thank you very much for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it a lot .

The roof on the left looks very blotchy and uneven in tone. Good job on the teacher, but the legs and feet of the two centermost children are too light.

I have adjusted the legs of the children.

edit: lol i meant that I adjusted the brightness/contrast on the legs lmao that sounded odd

Yes, I see you've adjusted levels a bit. GL author.

This is beautifully done. Nice restoration effort!