I think that the wing needs a little bit more work...

Agreed, but it wouldent let my do with it what i wanted, so i just left it. i was trying to blend it in photoshop and make it look all nice but the photoshop wouldn't let me blend!

Only one wing?

Maybe this would help, http://www.5min.com/Video/How-to-Blend-to-objects-Together---Photoshop-189410226

Adding another wing blending it better would have helped.

Plenty of tutorials on this, and something you'll have to learn if you want to continue in photoshop! Good luck...

but he isn't flying past fast..... he is sitting still :-/

he is about to fry!

Well you have tried well....apart from one of the wing missing and the frog not being fat enough... Could have made better with the wing being a little different...

Fix up that little wing..looks kinda trasparent ...

lol

you need to pay attention to shadows. the shadows youve added make the background look 2d. try using distort or skew

Yours ...... lol love it !!!!!!!!

yup, really need to fix those shadows

@ jello... again this is a contest site, so yes it is meant to be perfect lmao... you seem to have taken a fancy to defending this one particular author from the minute you joined..hmmm bit suspicious indeed!!!!!!!!!!

Shadows are off but the real prob is the very old rusty signpost with the new sign. You should scruff it up a but. Funny tho

Sorry but this is a pretty poor job, the cutting out was clearly done quickly and there is little overall asthetic appeal imho. There was a lot more potential in this tongue twister.

I agree, sorry. It looks very badly chopped...

EDIT: Better but.. just not very exciting, I don't know.

Pls delete this entry of mine.... They are so right... I was in a rush and bad mood. Pls

don't think they delete for that reason lol.... why not make it again just this time take your time

Keiley you are right... but this was like a revenge from the PS.. I made lots of nice entry but never make it top 3.... I felt like I am givin' up...

DONT GIVE UP! Seriously, everyone starts somewhere. The more you practice the better you become. The most you put photos up, the more creative critism you will get and learn from to become better.

Why not find nine nice nurses and put them around a guy

funny.... lol

That's what I was picturing Loopyluv, the pic of the guy smiling in the hospital bed is a good start - just find 9 different nurses (or a couple of different and manipulate them a bit yourself), and put them around him. Even a pic of a guy drooling would be appropriate

i know how you feel about never getting into the top 3... i can't get there either and I try very very hard myself unfotunately I don't get too much advice on my pics so its hard to see where i am going wrong. You will get there in the end just don't give up, because it's only yoruself that you letting down in the end

Thanx all of you.... Really. You've been like a family to me with these comments. Really thanks a lot.

Not the best of results, but really good to see youre taking some of the suggestions on board and playing around with things - the top 3's will come (hopefully for me too at some point

I hope Ray they'll put me in to third place if I deserved it........ Thanks....

its road roller, you should have wrote it on image

whats a road roller ?

It isn't road roller.

Red lorry, yellow lorry.

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Great, now if you could just make it look less simple.

Red lorry, yellow lorry....Red lorry, yellow lorry.....Red lorry, yellow lorry.....uurrrarrgggg

lol random....

Could have done a better job on changing the colours, and it's a lil bit too simple imo

Eleven elephants? That's the tounge twister?

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the tongue twister is eleven benevolent elephants

pinkhippo "You WIN"

Great, we know the tounge twister. Now if only you could of turned it into something a little less simple and more artistic...

I agree with Josh, what is it that makes them benevolent?

"organized" for the purpose of doing good

maybe put them on a background then in a orderly fashion

Nice one but pretty simple....

Make them holing eachothers tails