This shot has so much potential, I love the shape of the letters and using the fake eye things. But... The framing is totally off, You should have the whole PXL showing, maybe is you can do the same again with a portrait shot instead. A little contrast wouldn't hurt either.

EDIT: hrm just remembered that this was probably because of the aspect ratio necessary. In which case... Dunno, Zoom out more. I don't think the contest description means it has to be in portrait rather than landscape?

EDIT AGAIN: It does say portrait

I love the little eyes forming the letters - but, yes - the whole letter(s) need to be able to be seen.

I totally agree . took the photo in landscape . unfortunately read the description too late going to try again tonight

how is that. more contrast and in portrait?

GREAT! Nice job!

Thanks

Yeah that is much better, good work!

Thanks for the advice.

wow, this is gorgeous...best of luck author