very OOF author

I have to agree

I'm afraid I have to agree to. I like the idea of the photo. I hope you can re-shoot it.
I would suggest a little more lighting, possibly coming the left of the frame. GL

Thanks to all

Really Crystle? Yet another one of your comments that is strictly critical and offers no element of value or constructive criticism. If you cannot assist the author with advice on making the photo quality better, then don't say anything at all. Didn't your mother ever teach you that if you can't say anything nice, then don't say anything?

I am new to this photography stuff so I don't have lots to offer as far as advice goes. I am sure that some of the others will offer some more technical advice.
Good Luck Author!

rbsgrl, it seems like crystal used a pretty common reply, although I can see where you're coming from. In case the author was not aware "OOF" is not a type-o for "off" (like some of us thought it was ) but the abbreviation for "Out Of Focus". I think there's not much else I can suggest other than re-shoot the subject.

I do understand what oof means..... but its ok..... every criticism is accepted, but it is better if given with advice for betterment.....

very very nice interesting shoot...best of luck