I think you crop your photo toooo much.A wider frame would look better IMHO!

It looks like he's missing the very end of his nose - I agree, I think the crop is just a bit too tight.

IMO not on theme. (side profile)

Thanks for your comment. The theme doesn't say anyone in the shot has to be in profile, just the pet. It is a profile of the dog's head. The theme also says that others can be in the shot, but that the pet should be the emphasis. Without the dog, the shot would just be of a guy laying there. The focus, or interesting thing is the dog laying her head on the guy.

They look sad, and hungry.

They were fighting, you know, when they're scream at each other.
Thank you for comment, EmiK

She looks to be an old puppy...Comfy on the bed, though!

very much saturated is this...

The colors, and the backlight glare make this look overly manipulated, rather than artistic. Sometimes, less is more...