Beautiful composition. Very nice photo!

A good effort, I would have liked a little more floor and less ceiling.

Thank you MossyB! They were doing construction as you can see by the boxes so I had to cut off the floor a bit.
Thank you!

Great angle for this, were you standing on something, or holding the camera up high?

nice idea, but the leaning lines are distracting.

The tilt of the lines, combined with the blurry person, hurts the focal point of your image (library). You can't help the motion blur, but you should straighten the crop for this using the ceiling horizontal as your benchmark, rotating the photo slightly to the right to correct the downward left tilt.

I like the blurry person...

nice catch

The angle is a bit extreme, they look like they should be sliding down the floor to the left, but the overall composition is quite nice.