shouldnt that be 3th? and no 3st? high score nonetheless i like the piece

Which, by the bye, as it is written, gives us the word "thirst." Nice drawing, author.

Hand rendered type is often a losing proposition, but you made this lettering work well for you. The fish are nicely done also.

Ok ..thanks ..you have right ..i fixed.

nice one.

You really nailed that mood you were going for here and the hand drawn lettering gives it some real character. Putting the lettering over the fish here though does kinda make it a bit harder to read though.