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*note, this poem was written by myself. i've not had it published online anywhere, so i can not link to it like that.*

Huddled in a corner, trying to make myself see what it is i cannot face,
Arms wrapped around my knees, trying to forget what i cannot replace,
These pains in my gut are more than just physical,
These images are more than just mental...
But i cannot explain, nor can i justify
the reasons i feel as if i've got to break free and fly...

...the sun sets along the same horizon day after day...
...the same three words repeated the same way...
...echoes from the past ricochet across the divide...
...this canyon in my heart I cannot hide...

And i've tried to replace this feeling once before
I've tried to scrape my heart up off the floor
No matter what i do, i'm reminded of what could be
Hands over my eyes attempting to hide myself from me
I'm nothing like what i was striving for
i'll always be thinking there must be something more... (5 years and 1662 days ago)

avatar SHIPLEYGIRL

such talent you have great poem

avatar dollmommy
dollmommy says:

Very nicely done, I love it. Great poetry also. Best of luck to you!!

avatar sophia
sophia says:

i like how you draw the face

avatar itsdesign
itsdesign says:

i like this

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