The lighting is weird, since the moons are reflecting a light source that, from appearances, should be emanating from the DNA strand, but the strand is so dark. You should light the DNA so that it is the light source, instead of being a dark shadowy thing.

what ever. i made that up in 5 min.
i don't like this work anyway...

AND i cannot work with so much objects in scene. my geforce fx 5200 does not like it.

if even you don't like this, why have you uploaded it?

well... i dont know.

maybe someone else is going to like it...

If you allready say you dont like it.. why would anyone else like it? even if you dont like it.. dont say that LOL

and mossy is just trying to help you improve if you just wanna upload 5 minute woks on the go then i dont understand why you participate in a contest... ur images are goign to be stored in ur profile page.. if u ever wanna do something graphically it could actualy help you get a job by using this as a showcase... just saying....

aaah... whatever i'm useless...

but i like my other enteries...

Author is GR8............. Salaaam hai.....

nice attitude..... this is the place where ur work is gng to judge worldwide. and if u dnt want to judge then simple dnt upload it.