Perfume M - created by vosya


Perfume M
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avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

The color palette is kind of visually jarring, too much green, which is overpowering what should be your focal point, the bottle...The logo on the bottle is too small and blurry looking. The box looks somewhat blurry, as well, with what appears to be a "dent" in the lower RH corner, but does not correspond to the sharp edges.

I'd suggest cropping it down (or making your focal point occupy at least 1/2 of your picture plane), and change the tone of that green, perhaps darkening it at least.

avatar layerstack

Agree with MossyB, also the liquid should be visilbe within the bottle..

author says:

I hope it's better now

avatar tioilmo
tioilmo says:

It's a good start. Note the work of other participants and study the features of transparency and shadow. The picture looks a little blurry. Go ahead

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