Your image will be judged on its content, composition and skill demonstrated. Words in the image generally detract from the image and unless they really improve the image, people usually vote lower because of them. I would suggest that you remove your sales pitch and put it in the description.

problem is that a lot of people will not read the description and as my entry is actually the youtube video and not this 1 frame I thought it important to mention that.

almost everybody reads the description author.. people here likes to know more about the entries, if you can remove that content and place it in the description that would be cool..

A lot of people read the comments, too. So if they miss it in the description, they'll know to look because of the comments!

NOW the image is beautiful!! And I really enjoyed the video. I would like to be able to do that soon.

well done author.. this looks really different without the distraction and I enjoyed the video too.. nice work..

Very nice work... The animation is pretty cool too !

congrats..