IMHO you should set the torch in a perspective a little more believable, notice that the ray lights end in his forehead and the torch doesn't point there, maybe on the tip of the nose.
Anyway, is a good entry, a great finding source, good luck!

Many thanks enblanco i take your comments on board
Thank you

It's a good idea, but Enblanco is correct. I'd also change the format from a horizontal rectangle to a vertical one, but that's just me. GL author.

Thanks guys. Made adjustments which were obvious! Cant believe i didnt spot it. Must practice more......
Merry Christmas all. x

Now it's much better, good work!