Looks good! Should have a hi-res image, though.

Fantastic work author...In this type of the contests High resolution is a must cause small details that are visible only there can show your work...best of luck

The hair rope was a nice creative touch. Gives the image a story. gl

I am a little disappointed that the more creative entries didn't ended in this contest above the less creative ones... not you to blame though you made a great enry.

The best doodles so far High score

oh if you went to Catholic School in the 50's you would so be a right smack bottom by nuns with rulers!!! giggle snort, great entry, good luck

Thanks guys. I did go to a Catholic school drivenslush. No nuns with rulers, but I did go through 3 school diaries one year because they kept getting confiscated after I filled them with doodles

Clever ... simple ... and well done!

What Arca said. It always helps to look at sources upside down! A little of the smoke in a radial blur would be all that I'd suggest, otherwise great job.

Congrats!