93 comments received ( finished contests only ):
avatar Drivenslush

hehehe, can see the improvement with the blur... don't knock yourself author, it's a really great chop, be proud of that (great vision)

(5 years and 1257 days ago)

When the bottle breaks
avatar Drivenslush

First version is more to my taste. (the one stored in the SBS.) The chunks (and I know they are suppose to look like broken glass) just don't work for me. They kind of look like debris that wasn't deleted/erased from another photo. But who knows, I'm completely loop the loop. Still a great chop

(5 years and 1257 days ago)

When the bottle breaks
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Adding the broken glass really makes this work now. My only problem is with the line where the wave meets the hull of the ship, and I still think the water looks better in step 3, but it's a well made and imaginative image.

(5 years and 1257 days ago)

When the bottle breaks
avatar spaceranger

Congrats once again!!

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

Spoooooky House!
avatar spaceranger

Congrats!!

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

PXL Endeavour
avatar spaceranger

Congrats!!

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

Mantiscycle
avatar hereisanoop

Congrats

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

Spoooooky House!
avatar hereisanoop

Congrats

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

PXL Endeavour
avatar hereisanoop

Congrats

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

Mantiscycle
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Congrats, well done!

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

Mantiscycle
avatar George55
George55 says:

Congrats... for third.

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

Spoooooky House!
avatar George55
George55 says:

Congratulations for your 2nd...

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

PXL Endeavour
avatar Mambo5
Mambo5 says:

Message in a bottle..

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

When the bottle breaks
avatar oziipop
oziipop says:

Congrats! Well done... wish you had a SBS to look at.

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

Mantiscycle
avatar Drivenslush

Congrats!

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

Mantiscycle
avatar George55
George55 says:

Congratulations.

(5 years and 1258 days ago)

Mantiscycle
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

IMO reverting to something like Step 3 would be an improvement, with less yellow in the water, and not so much of a confusing dark mass in front of the bow. This can be a great image with the right tweaks.

(5 years and 1259 days ago)

When the bottle breaks
avatar JimLemon
JimLemon says:

Very nice, indeed! Looking forward to seeing those improvements you'll be working on (Holding my vote for later too, I'm pretty sure it'll be worth the wait!)

(5 years and 1260 days ago)

When the bottle breaks
avatar Drivenslush

oh the DRAMA!

(5 years and 1260 days ago)

When the bottle breaks
avatar robvdn
robvdn says:

My first half second reaction was 'WOW!'
Then on closer looking I realized you have potential gold here but there's more work to be done before it is actual gold. Your source of the ship is great and I would have left the front part of the ship in the chop.
IMHO you should give this chop a couple more hours, enhance the blending of the waves, play around with color settings and try to add more sources to tell a story.
You could for instance use a radial blur on the bottle, I suppose this is an eye of the storm, add a couple of things flying around, to create a more chaotic look (remove the birds, they do not fly in storms).
I see great potential here and hope you will spend some extra time in this chop to make it great!
Not voted yet because I want to wait and see what you can come up with in the end, hope others will also.

(5 years and 1260 days ago)

When the bottle breaks
avatar Mambo5
Mambo5 says:

I love,LoVe this!! "R!!" ..from his eyes into this mans sole.. To his story line wrinkles!..the close details of this piece tells this mans story! Good luck to you!

(5 years and 1260 days ago)

life at sea
avatar Drivenslush

Wowzers Cool

(5 years and 1260 days ago)

life at sea
avatar spaceranger

The new source worked out great, looks just like the original! Well worth the extra time you spent fixing this really fine entry.

(5 years and 1263 days ago)

PXL Endeavour
avatar George55
George55 says:

Love it ! Very good job here... nice to see works like yours...

(5 years and 1263 days ago)

Mantiscycle
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marina08 says:

Ready to go!
Good job!

(5 years and 1264 days ago)

PXL Endeavour
avatar Mambo5
Mambo5 says:

"Bug'N!!" Love it!! Good job author!!

(5 years and 1264 days ago)

Mantiscycle
avatar hereisanoop

Good built, Looks convincing

(5 years and 1265 days ago)

Mantiscycle
avatar Drivenslush

...and after it eats your head, the lower half of your body continues to mate with it. hehehe (couldn't resist) Love it

(5 years and 1265 days ago)

Mantiscycle
avatar Mike
Mike says:

It's a nice idea you have there. I would try to work on the motorbike parts, gears and rearview mirrors mostly, to match the visual style of the mantis parts (kinda sketchy). Also try to improve the shadow and reflection on the floor, i'll hold on my vote to see if you can work a bit on those extra points.

(5 years and 1266 days ago)

Mantiscycle
avatar CorneliaMladenova

Cool reptile

(5 years and 1267 days ago)

Deputys nightmare
avatar spaceranger

Don't feel too bad, I've made the same mistake, many others have also including mods. It's definitely worth the fixing IMO. Don't forget to change the source link. Good Luck!

(5 years and 1267 days ago)

PXL Endeavour
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Author you do need at least a written description of how the entry was made. An SBS (step by step) would be better and helps show how you created the entry. It's in the Photoshop Rules:
5.4. No External Source used in your Entry:
In this case, write in your description how your entry was made.

Keep in mind that if there's something not clear, the moderators might ask you to explain or post a step by step guide. This way we can keep the contests fair for everyone!

(5 years and 1268 days ago)

Spoooooky House!
avatar spaceranger

Author I think you've put the url in the wrong box. The link works when I copy and paste it but not when you click on it.

I'm afraid I have some bad news about the source, it's under a Creative Commons No derivative works license. That means it cannot be modified, remixed, transformed or built upon. You always have to check for the CC symbol with an equal sign (=) in a circle, it means no derivative works.

I did find an almost exact match for the source here:
https://pixabay.com/en/space-shuttle-endeavour-shuttle-708635/

I hope you can correct your image, I'll ask the Contest Moderator to give you some time before sending a warning.

(5 years and 1268 days ago)

PXL Endeavour
avatar hereisanoop

Very good craft... perfect and well done

(5 years and 1269 days ago)

PXL Endeavour
avatar George55
George55 says:

This is a good entry... good thinking, and good transformation. GL.

(5 years and 1269 days ago)

PXL Endeavour
avatar Drivenslush

How much fun is that? Though with all those holes the drag would be horrific LOL.. great job

(5 years and 1269 days ago)

PXL Endeavour
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Looks good, needs SBS. (Author, you can post your SBS along with your entry).

(5 years and 1270 days ago)

Spoooooky House!
avatar hereisanoop

Congrats

(5 years and 1272 days ago)

Santagoyale
avatar thefinalcut

Great chop! Looks movie posterish. Good luck author!

(5 years and 1277 days ago)

Santagoyale
avatar hereisanoop

Nice idea with the surveillance cam.. well done author

(5 years and 1279 days ago)

Deputys nightmare
avatar CorneliaMladenova

Creepy Santa! Good luck, Author!

(5 years and 1281 days ago)

Santagoyale
avatar George55
George55 says:

Nice work.... good luck.

(5 years and 1281 days ago)

Santagoyale
avatar Drivenslush

hehehe, reminds me of the Futurama Robot Santa for some reason, AWESOME!

(5 years and 1282 days ago)

Santagoyale
avatar hereisanoop

Very convincing and terrific... Welldone author

(5 years and 1282 days ago)

Santagoyale
avatar shaiju1974

Nice!!! and Goodbye for all the pxleyes members!!!!

(5 years and 1821 days ago)

Sunset shot....
avatar robvdn
robvdn says:

Congrats on winning this last contest

(5 years and 1913 days ago)

Sunset shot....
avatar TorDoni
TorDoni says:

Congrats on the last win.

(5 years and 1914 days ago)

Sunset shot....
avatar madamemonty

(5 years and 1914 days ago)

Sunset shot....
avatar madamemonty

Congrats Dave.... I think I'm goin' to cry now... :-S

(5 years and 1914 days ago)

Sunset shot....
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Congrats!

(5 years and 1917 days ago)

Conceptualize