34 comments received ( finished contests only ):
avatar kcinsti
kcinsti says:

I use that basic method so often I have it set up as an action

(5 years and 2220 days ago)

Following Mother
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

To get rid of a white line like around the legs in your image: if you have it on a separate layer, select the area outside the legs w/ the magic wand tool, expand the selection by 1 pixel, feather 1 pixel, and delete. You may have to repeat if it's still obvious.

(5 years and 2220 days ago)

Following Mother
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Look at your floor source. See how it's darker back in the corner & gets lighter in the foreground? That's what your floor should do. Once you've done that you can make your reflections a bit brighter. GL author.

(5 years and 2220 days ago)

Museum
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

You have time to fix it...

(5 years and 2227 days ago)

Wall-Clock
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

The glow on the numbers and parts of the girl's arm overlap the inside rim. It should be dark all around.

(5 years and 2228 days ago)

Wall-Clock
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Nothing should be overlapping the dark interior of the circle.

(5 years and 2228 days ago)

Wall-Clock
avatar Heathcliffe

Well done - all is good with your entry. Very cute little boy.

(5 years and 2233 days ago)

Baby with mother
avatar wazowski
wazowski says:

Not bad, but I have a few issues. First of, I think it's a pity that the source image is blurry, while I dont see any reason why of that decision. Then you might want to check your light source: clouds receive light from left, the hut gets light from the right. Finally, there's something with the composition that can be done better. Why is the hut against the top border of the image? Give it more space. Or place it more outside the canvas, up to you. But right now it looks a bit uncomfortable. And well, you dont háve to make the whole image symmetrical, but with such staircase and hut in the middle, I might have expected them centered in the image. Or something completely different, but right now it looks just a bit out of place. Of course just my opinion, feel free to disagree . Good luck!

(5 years and 2233 days ago)

Way to sky
avatar Heathcliffe

I agree about the blur - especially at the top. Nice concept but I think sharp edges would work better

(5 years and 2241 days ago)

XD-ANDROID
avatar tnaylor21286

I think this may look better (and this is just my honest opinion) if you got rid of the blur on the red edges. I wouldn't distort the reflection either. Just duplicate the completed android guy and flip him vertically. Then line the feet up so they are touching, reduce the opacity to about 40% and use a gradient mask that gradually masks out the reflection from bottom to top. I feel this will make you entry much stronger. Good luck author!

(5 years and 2241 days ago)

XD-ANDROID
avatar Heathcliffe

Good work - I like the overall feeling, the typo is detracting for me - I think you meant 'adventure' not 'avventure ? Good luck

(5 years and 2247 days ago)

TinTin 2
avatar Heathcliffe

I'd've preferred the text to be absent. It kind of detracts from the rest of the feeling of the pic. Nice idea, good luck

(5 years and 2248 days ago)

prisoner
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Good luck author, it's a clean graphic image now.

(5 years and 2248 days ago)

TinTin 2
avatar Chrys Rizzo

Love it, sweet and Tin Tin adventures was my favorite one! Congrats

(5 years and 2249 days ago)

TinTin 2
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Foreground type and shadows really don't work. Too many fonts over all. A good poster needs visual continuity. If this was my poster I'd simplify it by removing "Everybody know him" and the foreground type & shadow. Simplicity is always best, let the graphic image stand out. GL author.

(5 years and 2250 days ago)

TinTin 2
avatar Drivenslush

I'm pretty sure that source is okay

(5 years and 2250 days ago)

TinTin 2
avatar Drivenslush

author, please double check with copyright law on the image of the car and character, i think there is a lock on usage, red flag and ask a mod... good work but the copyright rules could wonk you out

(5 years and 2250 days ago)

TinTin 2
avatar spaceranger

Congrats!!

(5 years and 2252 days ago)

FOOD-DISH