577 comments given:
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Looks better already!

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

It
avatar animmax
animmax says:

I like the effect - I would suggest looking for another source for the hair.. The reflection of the chairs, table and photographer just dont seem to pull it off. Maybe an alternate source for the hair?

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

CHROME
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Nice work - but if thats the light source why is there shadow on the hands?? Maybe try and colour match out the shadows?

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

It
avatar animmax
animmax says:

OOHHH very Tim Burton.. Looking at the hi res you have a slight halo effect on the edges especially in darker areas of the background. Nice work.

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

Nightmare in Breadland...
avatar animmax
animmax says:

I gather your talking about gravity?? You need a skydiver or something to help sell it!! Maybe two? One writing a speeding ticket!! Hahaha.

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

on air
avatar animmax
animmax says:

I didnt think we were allowed to directly use the members photo? Has this changed?

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

unnamed
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animmax says:

Nice and there is some impressive lighting too.. Fractal lava? Ok, I think you need to fill in the gap where the eye 'was' to give the mask a full back so to speak. If you follow me.. You can see it clearer in step 5. There is no need to cut the shape out for the right eye. Just continue your line down..

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

destroyed Mask
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animmax says:

Lucky its not a pay phone - i would hate to think where you might have to stick the coins..

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

Dog and Bone
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animmax says:

WILSON!!!

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

HEEEELP!!!
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animmax says:

Nice - your bonnet outline on the foreground car looks a touch transparent near the windscreen. There is also a blur along there that effects the rim on the next car back. I would maybe burn the shadow side of the red car also..

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

Not Ready for the Pasture
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Author: try using a displacement map to bring back the shape of the face? Not enough of a chrome look to it as gopan suggests also. More silvers and blues?

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

Hitchhiker
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Source is a previously photoshopped image. You can still see the original background in the rear quarter window.

(5 years and 3578 days ago)

chrome police car
avatar animmax
animmax says:

I think its a great image - well done - Sadly i dont think it fits the theme..

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

Save energy...Save the Earth
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Match the blur of the image to your sign??

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

NSFW (Not Safe For Work)
avatar animmax
animmax says:

While yes its well done and a nice image.. No one concerned about trademark infringement? You know - the right to use anothers logo without permission?? Regardless of the source.. Very sorry author - nice work too.

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

renovation
avatar animmax
animmax says:

I would also suggest bringing some colour back into the image - help us see its the puppy.

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

Floral
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Looking in the hi res you can see a lot of the straight edges are left in the image. Maybe blur them a touch.

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

Clean Grass
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Its a different source of light for the bone, maybe try and match it to your source some more?

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

Mine
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Nice effect

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

fish samich
avatar animmax
animmax says:

A clever idea - some blur at the top of the blade as mentioned. I would add a very light layer of bread over the taper of the blade to give it some more colour - its very difficult to distinguish from the background.

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

Bread and Knife
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animmax says:

Clever idea author: but the shadow remains? You could probably use either the ring or little finger and not have the shadow issue. Reminds me of a Stephen King story.. Or Yakuza.. Hahaha.

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

pointed at the rong guy
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Very well drawn..

EDIT: figured it was you..

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

strange
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Nice - but i would trim down the wrist some more, more of a taper? IMHO.

(5 years and 3579 days ago)

Life Breakin
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Very impressive

EDIT: Why does this not surprise me!!

(5 years and 3580 days ago)

Please Recycle :)
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Great Chop

(5 years and 3580 days ago)

Breaking Free...
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animmax says:

While not specific to the artwork - i dont get how the front forks attach to the wheel? Doesnt look like it would work to me?? About the image, if your light source is what we are seeing then the shadow is on the wrong side? But I see a wall maybe? and a reflection? If thats the case might shadows be coming forward too?? While on the shadow - it needs to be pushed further back I think?I can see the shadow under the wheels...

(5 years and 3580 days ago)

Chrome dream
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Hahaha - maybe not so?? I still see a spot on her arm? Was it always there??? I am going crazy?? Hahaha

(5 years and 3580 days ago)

Jungle Queen
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Author: firstly you need to some. I looked in your sbs and it looked like a cropped image! I was just trying to keep you clear of the mods as I have seen entries removed for less! By description I was referring to the one on the main page, that the sky is your own image! Not the text in the sbs as a lot of people dont look there!

(5 years and 3580 days ago)

Apoliptical day
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Nice work - I admit to not seeing the source in there till I looked at the sbs.. corrections as already mentioned.

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

some kind fo creature
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Well your light source is probably overhead! So a shadow at their feet??

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Country Robots
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Yes you have made a change or 4!!

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

walk like .......
avatar animmax
animmax says:

You need to show the full unedited image of the sky in your sbs. Maybe also make reference to it in your description?

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Apoliptical day
avatar animmax
animmax says:

You seem to have picked up a spot on the arm now? Cannot see the background under her arms too..

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Jungle Queen
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Interesting - you bottom blur trail ends short on the yellow one..

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Venice Butterflies
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animmax says:

Not sure how to go with this - its very similar to another entry already in. Maybe just check with a mod for clarification.? Good work on the permissions.. We should use it as an example for others on how it should be done!!

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Mute Mask
avatar animmax
animmax says:

I like the image and the effort - but I am wondering on the lightsource and the shadow? Would it be on the ground?

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Spider venice mask
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Author: if you have a lot to upload you are normally better off ticking the 'publish entries later' box and then it should appear all at once I think. I would like to see your source image for this..

EDIT: link up..

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Hmm Butterfly effect
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Good rework..

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

R.I.P
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Author: you can go to my contests and edit your source to link it to the right place.. Sounds like a lucky find!

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Protest
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Very creative - I agree with Golem though.. Maybe washout some of the background colour to make the bread stand out more? You have also left some weeds and grass on the timber fence at the bottom, the clone tool should take them out quick enough..

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Bakers Buddy
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Nice work - I would try and work on the join line in the middle bun. Its just a bit too obvious, maybe match up the grooves and shadows?

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

New Product
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Nice skills.. Well Done

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

mouse
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Nice - looking at the hi res there is just a touch more work needed on the chin. Also is that a masking remnant in the eye of the mask?

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Half Unmasked
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Nice - would like to see a sbs on how you did the background.. Looks interesting.

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Oracle
avatar animmax
animmax says:

I like the background work.. Looks good..

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

ballerina
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Nice but I would soften your edges a bit, especially the shoulder and the elbow. It looks like you also have left the original background in between the arms and the body! Nice work.

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Jungle Queen
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Have you got a source image for the sky?? Your sbs does not mention the way you made it?

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Apoliptical day
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Hahaha - it was the bangles actually - I have the album.. Author - looking at the hi res you have some really nasty edges, but I suppose thats the way you want it? Maybe a little blur for the last dancer etc? I would try and sharpen your pyramids a bit though?

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

walk like .......
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Nice image - but you have opposing highlights on each hand? See if you can work just one direction?

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Be Free
avatar animmax
animmax says:

Hahaha - yes the highlights kill it a bit - funny though.. Good blend to the udder!

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

Handy cow