Sander Comments placed and received

What is the idea behind the image? Why did you use the map this way?

The transition between the winter and the autumn is a bit too strong, also the water looks too bright.

Maybe change the horse on the left completely because its also out of perspective.

The leftside of the buddha looks too dark compared too the rightside. Maybe lighten the left and darken the right a bit. Most of the buddha should be in shade because of where the lightsource is coming from.

Great style, congrats!

Congrats, good work!

The fainted planet looks as if it stands in front of the clouds.

The idea is nice, but you could try to improve it by giving the texture depth and shading.

The cracks also need highlights at the rightside of the dark shadow lines.

Nice schoolboard, just maybe a bit to clean. Could use some wipes and other fainted textstuff.

There are some lines that are a bit too blurry.

Great entry!

Try to fade the background mountains and make the foreground less faded(fog not in the right place), thats a standard rule to give an illustration depth.

Its a nice feel but a couple of things need more attention, shadow from the pilars and her dress and posture(anatomy).

Nice drawing, but there are some things that dont look right. For instance the mouth is too small and too high. There are some basic rules when drawing a head/face, its a good idea to study them.

Try to make her a bit less bright so that she better fits into the picture.

Great work! But the sticky note looks a bit to "clean". Maybe a little part of an edge would come of, or a little bit of a fold somewhere. And I was thinking that there should be a little bit of the edge from the paper where it is pressed on should come through.

I think you did a great job!! Maybe next time make the sci-fi sky the usual color, black. Then you can make some blueish/purpleish gasclouds and some bright stars wich bring the light into the room.

Dont want to eat that!

A bit to simple, its not really fighting back.